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Great novel. Firstly, it is a pleasure to read. With my eyes, I spotted zero grammar mistakes and the paragraph flowed perfectly. Secondly, the characters give off a very real feel. While the situation are extram, everyone has a cause for how they react. I was very glad how the family gets questioned multiple times for their rash actions that occurred in the first chapter. Despite having their own, reasonably unreasonable, justifications. It adds layers and is personally what I think makes everything work so well. Lastly, this is not my normal genre I like to read. So, when I say this novel pulls you in and gets you interested, it really attests to the authors great writing. Anyone reading this review should not hesitate to give this story a chance.
Hi Fridah! Poor Zhao Ting! And what horrible family she hailed from! I am SOO glad to read that no permanent damage has been done to her! So cute that Shen Wei is there so save the damsel in distress đđđ Great job with the plot! Can't wait to read until the family gets the well-deserved retribution!!!
Let's see... The plot is great. Characters seem nice too tho it gets a bit confusing when so many names are used at once and repeated constantly. There are many grammatical errors but they can be fixed with slight editing. There are more than many punctual mistakes which make it a bit difficult to read. Like the double quotes are misplaced a lot. The world background could be explained more. And not to mention the characters. It can give a wide view of the story to readers. The story is going with a good pace and seems interesting. Keep up
From the first chapter I got a lot told to me about the story, I actually enjoyed it a lot. Not a stories can capture what the story is supposed to be about or even show what's happening to the characters. But to make my point of this review, I enjoyed it so far and wish for more chapters! This is definitely a recommended read!
Superb. Since chapter one, my emotions are unstable. Worried, sad, angry, happy. Well, more from the first one than the last one. The development in the story is good, the characters so far are good, for the title, the ML will show up later on. So far, the FL had survived two situations, by luck or not, she survived... (Or it seems so...) keep going dear author! I'll wait for updates.
It's a great novel- zero grammatical mistakes (at least i couldn't spot them) and a there's a great flow to the story, amazing pacing. The characters are well-written, albeit a little extreme and this story surely starts off with a great start- the first chapter that will hook you in. New readers, don't hesitate to read it.
This will be a slightly long review. I'll use the five criteria for rating books to rate this one. Writing Quality: As English is not her first language, there will be some errors. However, there are minor errors and they should be easily overlooked. Story Development: The story development is evenly paced. It's not fast paced or slow paced. It's perfectly paced. Character Design: The character design is perfectly done. It's well written and nicely done. Updating Stability: You can take a look at the update schedule and see for yourself. World Background: It is a very easy and simple world to understand. No complicated concept is involved. Overall: A good read in my opinion. The Author has put a lot of work in making this book an enjoyable read. I think you would enjoy it.