Reviews of Transmigrated into a Novel: Payne Gale, The Villain's Spouse
Transmigrated into a Novel: Payne Gale, The Villain's Spouse
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Hi, I'm a newbie at this site and this is one of the books I've read so far in the past 48 hrs but bruh. What is this? My eyes are bleeding at the grammar errors. Author, please reflect and rewrite this because it s*cks. If you can't take my blunt facts about your book, well sike! Have justice to your readers!
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A good start so far. I hope the story can focus more on what the MC is doing as it can help readers understand better what is happening around the MC, but other than that, the story makes you want to know what is going to happen next. Overall, I recommend anyone finding this story to take their time and give this story a go.
Okay so I like this book, and I like the premise of dying and reincarnation into a different world.... the emotions portrayed in the first chapter are really good...and make you feel for the MC... for the next chapters I found that it drags on quite a lot.... The plot needs to happen.... I'm sure there's still more the author has planned but please if you can speed up the progression between chapter 2 and 4... Overall this book has potential and I look forward to what the author can do with it 😃😃😃
