Transferred to the Monster World (HIATUS)

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The writing is a bit messy. There is to many side characters and side stories that it seems like the mc is unimportant. Its like reading Naruto, but we are too focus on Sasuke 75% of the time. It got a little better around chapter 60s, but just please focus on the mc...

This is a review of the first arc, I will say that it is a good beginning but it has so much haste and a very good concept but your characters' emotion is just a mess of illogical response to different situations, you can not let them accept everything like it is normal to accept this kind of thing. you make them transport to a completely different world and the only reaction they have is that of surprise, no fear, no caution, no depression, no worry, no distrust, no anxiety, no loss, no panic, just some mild surprise and more than that you make them kill each other on the spot even though you add the parents of all students to the mix and the reaction of our group of friends is to run and hide and act normally until somehow you choose the MC girlfriend to betray them and kill them then when they wake up as a monster you make them again accept everything easily with just some worry about their status as if there previous life as humans don't mean to much for them then again you make them help an unknown monster like them even though she tried to kill them before like their sensibilities are not even existed and on top of that you make them forgive her easily again after they defeated her and again accept her reasons like some 5 years old kids, on top of that you make the princess'reaction to everything Exaggerated, even if there is Love at first sight, there is no reason for a Runaway princess to trust them let alone love him. in the end, you make such a good storyline but a very bad foundation.

This is a great novel. the setup is bland but you get interested in the execution of the premise very quickly. the beginning is very rough because the creator is more dedicated to creating new chapters for his fans than making the starting chapters beginner-friendly. but don't let that dissuade you from reading this book

I am writing my second review on this book the first one had become pretty old and I have come from 4th chapter to 52nd chapter. Well it was not a smooth journey but the author is surely improving and after reading this far,I want to read the end of the story so author keep up the good work and do your best.

I don't know why someone would call this good the writing is horrible. I can't get through more than a handful of chapters so yeah but it does update ever day it seems.

A friend of mine has suggested me to read this novel . This novel is pretty interesting but at some places it's like a maze . But I enjoyed it and I wish that this novel will evolve .