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So i downloaded the webnovel app recently and this was the first book recommended for me to read and i read 40 chapters of it before making this review. - The translation/writing is okay, it's got a lot more grammatical and typos than average but it's not the absolute worst i've seen. - The story is a system + harem with *** scenes occurring at an average of every 2 chapters, plus the MC is noted in the beginning as having a really high libido which only gets worse as he becomes stronger. - What's actually nets this review a lower score, is the way everyone interacts with the MC. All the girls make him out to be a "protector of women's rights" when he constantly takes advantage of women as well. Everything else is okay i guess, but the story is still pretty much in the prologue 40 chapters in and the harem is already at 5 wives (who were all virgins even though one was the owner of a brothel apparently) and that's not including one night stands, "concubines" and a 15/16 year old child...
where to start... 1. to many plot holes in the first 10 chapters to even count. 2. pls do NOT use logic in any form while reading this book. Even basic abilities to function as a human are being thrown out of the window. 3. Bad writing quality, lots of words missing and no grammar program etc. was used to help the lacking vocabulary. 4. the MC is dumb as a brick, not sure how he functioned as a human being before but he appears to be incredible in bed 5. do not spend money on that book!!!
To be honest I read these novel to chapter 50 it's a good novel no doubt about it good background and easy to understand but the MC of the novel is perverted and the heram tag prove it in the novel you don't go for romantic them it's brutal world the stronger you are the more woman you get in starting the MC is mature but after few chapter he became to childish so that's it