1 Hey.... that's pretty good..! (Edited)

Author's notes:

Hi, i edited/fixed this chapter to make it less cringe. I will soon be doing it to all of the chapters, so yes expect new changes.. Hopefully...

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"So this goes here and that goes there.." louc says in a small voice.

A fat man comes in and starts talking trash.

"Ay yo man shut yo ass up, no one cares about you, stop wasting your time, you're trash, you'll never make it big, Lucifer." the fat dude says in a confident tone, mocking Louc.

The fat dude said "Lucifer" because Louc is handsome.

Louc heard what the man says, he glared at the fat man and said "At least im not Pumbaa." Louc chuckles a bit, and goes back to the game.

the fat man heard this, and wanted to refute and insult back but when he saw the eyes of the young man he decides its not best to fight with a kid. the fat man leaves with a solemn expression.

Headshot!

"Why is this guy so good?" Louc shocked at how he saw the opponent/enemy playing he thought 'i wish i could be like that 1 tapping people.'

Suddenly something developed..? appeared....? 'is that a screen?' Louc thought.

"A screen? What..!?" Louc said and the other players in the lobby with him are confused, confused one of the players asked "Why the fuck are you screaming?"

Louc heard the player but ignores him and mutes to focus on the thing that appeared infront of him.

"a screen? system?" Louc says in a nervous tone.

Louc then tries to read the texts in front of him.

[Gamer System has established its host it shall now give the host amazing abilities]

Louc then got excited because the dream that he talked about earlier is finally coming through.

[Please input the games that the host plays]

and so on..

Louc looks at the thing in front of him still not believing that this is real, but he tries to input CSGO, LoL. 'this is the only games i play, maybe in the future i'll play more games when something new comes out.' he thought to himself while putting in the games.

[Host has succesfully inputed the games generatinf abilities]

[Csgo]

Abilities:

Extreme Concentration

I can hear you (Hearing)

Inhuman reaction

Amazing Aim

Im invisible (Rotation)

Stragetic Leader

Charm

Evolution:None

[League of Legends]

Abilities:

Extreme Concentration

Hit me (Dodging)

Kiss my Skills (Skillshots)

Where am i? (Rotation)

God's Eye (Prediction)

Strategic Leader

Charm

Evolution:None

[This is not the limit of the abilities that you can get, the host will be able to get more skills in the future if he works hard enough.]

"... What is this abilities..? " Louc surprised when he looked at the abilities that he has.

"Ayo bro can you fucking move you're ruining the game just leave if your gonna afk." A player said in the lobby.

Louc realizes that he forgot that he was playing, he looks at the score looking at the score 14-1, he chuckles 'time to make a comeback' he winks at the screen and unmutes his mic ready to play.

next second he got into the game it was a 1v5 situation with his teammates dead and him holding an ak47. looking at the 1v5 situation his teammates wanted to leave the game but decides to stay one last round, they wanted to humiliate the last player that's alive.

they started recording their screens hoping that the last dude moves and makes a horrible play.

"haha if this dude manages to 1v5 clutch i'll record myself eating shit" one of the confident players said.

"i'll record myself sucking a dudes cock if he manages, but its imposible he's trash, earlier he couldn't even hit his shots" another player shakes his head saying that its impossible.

And another dude who was streaming his game in twitch made a promise as well.

Stewie2k: "i'll give him 10 dollars if he manages to 1v5 clutch." the streamer says in a confident tone.

Chat:

yourmom:LOLOLOL BROKE BROKE BROKE BROKE BROKE BROKE BROKE

poldaroid:POG POG POG POG POG POG POG POG POG

Dramatic13yearold:LMAO STEWIE BROKE THE FUCK IS THAT 10$?? LOLOL

Wiseoldman:10$ that's it? really? dam you broke Feelsbadman.

Actuallygood:Lol 10$ wtf is that stewie put in more you pussy pussy pussy pussy

Randomuser1324:Stewie put in more +1

Suckstobeyou:Stewie put in more +2

Ikillyou:Stewie put in more +3

Viewers:Stewie put in more +10786

Stewie2k says "fine fine i'l put in 100$ how bout that?"

Viewers:GOOD GOOD GOOD

going back in the game Louc heard what Stewie said and got him motivated, even if stewie didn't say anything, Louc would've still played with motivation because he wanted to try out the skills he got from the system.

"Alright lets start" Louc said giving the lobby chills when he talked revealing a cold and tense atmosphere.

Louc began to control his character to move toward A, and is trying to plant it in A he moves forward not scared but is focused because of his [Extreme Concentration] Ability.

Extreme Concentration: Allows the Host/User to simulate his potential into an abnormal amount of degree, noises, screams will have no effect on the Hosts Concentration.

Louc is not only nervous because of his [Extreme Concentration] its also because of his ability [Inhuman Reaction].

Inhuman Reaction: Allows the Host to maximize his Reaction time to shooting, Flicking, Dodging, and so on.

Louc began to strategize in his mind, in Dust II is an iconic map known for its strong balance, the reason why its one of the popular maps that is chosen by several servers and chosen as a map in a tournament its because its a map with strong balance as i've mentioned earlier.

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Louc is playing on the T side or otherwise known as Terrorists they start with a bomb and the main objective for this team is to plant the bomb or kill all of the CT side ending the round with their win.

CT (Counter-Terrorists) side is different its main objective/goal is to defend the A side and B side their objective is to not let the T plant the bomb or kill them, CT side can also choose to kill all of the Terrorists thus ending the round with the CT side to win.

the score of the match is currently 1-14 currently the T side while the CT side is winning. The MC now has to face a 1v5 situation.

Back to the game

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Louc controls his character to go through the tunnels to head for A side, walking he found 1 player and shoots...

Headshot

Stewie saw this and just brushed it off as a lucky shot while the other players also did the same.

Louc again controls his character almost reaching A he found 2 players camping in a corner he shoots the 2 of them.

Headshot

Stewie saw this again and he can't brush it off as a lucky shot anymore maybe the 2 shots are but knowing him as a pro he knows that 3 lucky shots are rare .

now its a 1v2 situation in just 1 minute the atmosphere changed into a hard, tense atmosphere stewie and the other players, and viewers as well hold their breath fearing of missing something.

Chat:

Yourmom:GOD AIM GOD AIM GOD AIM GOD AIM GOD AIM

Viewer1:GOD AIM+1

Viewer2:GOD AIM+2

Viewers:GOD AIM+10628

Stewie thought 'those precise movements.. those flicks... thats nasty.... the rotation.... .... what the happened to him? earlier this dude couldn't even shoot?'

After Louc got the 2 kills he started planting the bomb at A, with his high concentration he checked if there was any other people around him.

but the time was almost up there we're 10 seconds left until it runs out so he quickly planted the bomb thinking that its alright but then.

he saw 1 enemy on the left and 1 enemy on the right he has an ak47 he can 1 tap both of them if he plays it right.

he flicked the one on the left.

Headshot

then in an instant he flicked at the left person,

he instantly locked down on the right person's head.

Headshot

Stewie:Wtf..?

Chat:Holy shit!

Players in the lobby:Goddamn

...

the chat, stewie, and the people couldn't even process what just happened it was so fast that if a person bilnks he wouldn't see what was happening.

Stewie:OHGHHHGGGGGHHH WTF WAS THAT?!

Chat:HOLY SHIT ITS A GOD

Players in the lobby: WTF?!

Louc says "hey where's the money?" Louc asked stewie. "oh and make sure to record your self eating shit, and the dude who promised to suck a cock."

Stewie and the others are speechless.

Stewie then breaks the quiet atmosphere saying "what's your paypal?"

the other players who made a promise said "fuck"

chat: LOLOL LITERALLY A GOD WTF

Louc doesn't realize that he is actually playing with stewie2k because he doesn't really use twitch that much. Louc isn't a die hard csgo fan he just wants good skills to destroy players. so he normally doesn't care about the esports so he doesn't know anything about stewie or popular players.

Chat: ITS A MASSACRE HAHA LMAO

Louc says "i'll give it to you later"

stewie nodded but remembered Louc couldn't see him so he replied with "alright".

the teams spawned again, Stewie then said "go B" Louc has the bomb again and nodded(he said ok) the

4 of them started controlling their characters to move to B, Louc then decides not to go to B but to go to A he wanted to confuse the enemy and his team by going A.

Stewie doesn't realize this and thought that the player that he talked to was following, and the 4 of them just kept moving towards B

Louc almost reached A noticed 5 enemies it was another 1v5 situation the enemies saw Louc as well

because of his team was in the other side, Louc didn't have any one to help him so Louc decides to shoot all of them.

he instantly locked his crosshair on the guy on the right.

Headshot

then the next one.

Headshot

then another one

Headshot

Instantly in 0.5 second everyone on the other team got massacred.

looking at stewie and the other players we're shocked and didn't know what just happened

Stewie:...

Players:...

Chat:...

Speechless..

Louc who was the one who did it is amazed at how fast he can flick and hit his shots 100%.

the enemy players saw this and gulped, Louc's team gulped as well.

Louc kept dominating upto 14 rounds it is now the score of 14-14 1 round left and this will become the greatest comeback that i know of in csgo history.

in the middle of the round Louc's entire team has been demolished once again he is in another 1v5, he uses his brain to outsmart, outmanuever the enemy team and went to B he decided that the enemy should be getting used to A by now because he kept going A, he used this advantage and went to stewie's body to pick up the bomb, but in the corner of his eye he saw a player camping and then *Bang! * Headshot

Louc 1 tapped the player who was camping then picked up the bomb to move to B.

the enemies heard the fire and know where louc is now, they all ran to B as fast as they could but Louc already planted the bomb and is waiting in a spot to massacre them all.

1 by 1 the enemy kept popping out of a corner being extremely careful they know how strong Louc is so they tried to flank 2 on the left side and 1 on top of the roof 2 on the right side, they thought that they had outsmarted Louc.

But Louc already knows this because of his int (intelligence) he has outsmarted their outsmarting.

Louc heard them coming and popped out of his spot stewie and chat we're watching with silence.

Headshot! the first two went down! Louc moves his crosshair instantly to the right side.

Headshot! another one dead! The one who was in the right side started firing! Only to be shot down on the head once more!

4 down! Just one more uptop! Louc immediately moves his crosshair to the top of his head and.. *Bang!* Immediately he shot..

Headshot!

*Victory!*

The game informed the players and were left speechless.

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Author's notes:

Hello im new i suck at writing i know this is just an excuse, as i am terrible i wish to learn more by writing stories and this is my first one. so i hope to improve it by writing stories i need it for school for my english school ;^; well have a nice day and i hope you tell me/criticize my writing please tell me the things that i am doing wrong thank you i love you :3.

Disclaimer: This is an op mc and i know alot of people hate those. You have been warned :3.

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