Reviews of Toiling
Toiling
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An interesting Story By an Amazing Author💕 I Loved The MC She Has Her own World 💞💞 A free soul... Well, I always Wanted Such a novel To add up to my library 💟 I recommend this book to everyone... 5 stars Recommendation💫💫 Keep It Up...💓 As the story is in progress Best Of luck...❤ N keep Updating Ur readers Hehe...❤
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I like how the novel starts with a well-thought of synopsis like that. A game of chess, the author has made reference about that, and I think she has every reason to. I can envision the protagonist slowly changing from a royal brat, which she is right now, to a beautiful and truly great queen who will rule the whole realm. I think I already said too much, but let me say this one more piece, I can't wait for the character development which I know is coming in the next chapters! job well done, author!
Didn't you say do your worst? Then, I'm going to do as worse I can. Yulia as a character: ⚫ She is strong, intelligent and fierce as she is ruthless. ⚫She loves her family fiercely and I believe this love of her will drown her one day but at the end of the day she is a human and no human can survive without love, compassion and kindness especially a ruler . ⚫She doesn't like spilling blood. If anything can be achieved by words, so why waste energy by unnecessary killing. I like this point of hers. ⚫She is cruel. For the crown she was ready to kill her father though he was an unfit ruler but still he was her dad...but she didn't kill him...her consciousness didn't allow her. Yulia as a Queen: (Will edit once I read further chapters ) And if you have read bullet for one then you don't need to ask about her writing skills. Dude, I freakin love that book.
Personally reading this gave me the vibes of Puffin classics, the quality in this work is no joke. Wonderfully done and the delicious flavour of literary techniques is blended fully with the plotline. The only flaw I found there was no hook! 1st and 2nd chapter just focus on MCs being free from the ball and then attending a banquet, which took two chapters with a lot of unnecessary info dumps (example, what FL studied ,what she ate, what she wrote) even I believe the chess part which had foreshadowing could've been summed up in lesser words. Nonetheless a worth read!
Well, I must say the author has a quality writing skill from what I read. Nice conversation and descriptions of the scenes. The characters are so understandable that it makes me feel the story so nicely. The plot up to how much I read sound interesting...all in all, a great book to be recommended! But a little advice, try to not keep a chapter's word limit above 1,500. The lengthy chapters might tire out readers at some points. All the best for your future updates!!
This story is so good, so believable and gripping that I will be thinking about it even while not actively reading. A gem! The characters seem so realistic that I feel like I know them in real life. The worrying events of highborn people come alive, and they will certainly keep the reader immersed. I can't stop reading. Reading just one chapter of this would be like taking just one piece of chocolate. You know that isn't going to happen!
