Reviews of Toaru Majutsu no Index: Dark Matter Project
Toaru Majutsu no Index: Dark Matter Project
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Went from cruel and calcula Mc to naive mc who doesn’t kill possible future enemies. Story is contradicting he went through experiments where he lost feelings because of how much pain he was inflicted yet he doesn’t kill the level 5 dude who could be a possible future enemy and give the bs reason that he doesn’t kill the innocent.
So far this is a masterpiece . I cannot find a suitable word to describe how good it is . A brillian idea , author look like natural born prodigy like he was meant to write this book . Nothing feel forced everything fused in a perfect mix named 'plot' and i have to say a great plot you have there . Accelerator is really terrfying enemy with his calculations . It is unique , hope Hikari reach that level , also will he get a way to counter Imagine Breaker That ability is annoying real , look how far he reached with it , just saw misaka level 6 ripped it and dragons came from where it was ripped and he regenerated it back , totally Op . If it is Hikari he would be a unique level 6 in the future . I mean others try to reach level 6 with just a single ability , for Hikari he would reach that level with 7-8 abilities . If his recovery reached level 6 , he would be able go regenerate from nothing , he can heal others too recover limbs or from bad illness . . . At least we saw what Railgun capable of in level 6
This is the first fan-fiction that I have read regarding 'Index' story-line and I have to say that I am loving it. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. This is a great story to read. For the Author; I would recommend trying to build on character interactions. In what I mean, is making the interactions seem more alive, rather than an conversation that is just happening. Additionally, working on the development of creating a connecting background to others parts of the 'Index' universe. Other than that, keep up the great work!
The Storydesign until now is good the only thing i would mention, is that the MC isn't really "evil" he feels more like a Anti-Hero because until now (im currently Chapter 23) he still has this Mental barrier against killing (the innocent) and still cares about people he doesn't know. Because of that he feels more of a (Anti-)Hero.
the story is beautiful only that many chapters are just description and others are more fillers, the story itself is short and follows the canon a lot even with the changes that mc has made, the world looks like aru's but in reality it is different by way of realities and various powers (accelerator is much weaker than the original) mc has good plot armor and the story itself is not very attractive but it is good to pass the time the problem is that the author doesn't know much about aru so there is some problem with the story itself, mc is a bit boring and cold, the story does not have a good growth of the mc, the love story seems a lot forced and too simple and there is no real progress i read up to ch 100 and the story has been on hiatus for a while i hope the author continues and improves
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