Toaru Majutsu no Index: Dark Matter Project

Overall a really great book I really am enjoying it, I created this review because I usually don't review and another novel stopped because she didn't get reviews so I am doing this because of this a really great book

Went from cruel and calcula Mc to naive mc who doesn’t kill possible future enemies. Story is contradicting he went through experiments where he lost feelings because of how much pain he was inflicted yet he doesn’t kill the level 5 dude who could be a possible future enemy and give the bs reason that he doesn’t kill the innocent.

So far this is a masterpiece . I cannot find a suitable word to describe how good it is . A brillian idea , author look like natural born prodigy like he was meant to write this book . Nothing feel forced everything fused in a perfect mix named 'plot' and i have to say a great plot you have there . Accelerator is really terrfying enemy with his calculations . It is unique , hope Hikari reach that level , also will he get a way to counter Imagine Breaker That ability is annoying real , look how far he reached with it , just saw misaka level 6 ripped it and dragons came from where it was ripped and he regenerated it back , totally Op . If it is Hikari he would be a unique level 6 in the future . I mean others try to reach level 6 with just a single ability , for Hikari he would reach that level with 7-8 abilities . If his recovery reached level 6 , he would be able go regenerate from nothing , he can heal others too recover limbs or from bad illness . . . At least we saw what Railgun capable of in level 6

it's good but it's bad predictable but that doesn't mean it's bad. has many plot holes but if you force yourselfe to ignore them you might enjoy

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This is the first fan-fiction that I have read regarding 'Index' story-line and I have to say that I am loving it. This story covers a character who experiences hell through various forms. It has certain elements that some people will love; dark, gritty, cruel and amazingly at times heart-warming. This is a great story to read. For the Author; I would recommend trying to build on character interactions. In what I mean, is making the interactions seem more alive, rather than an conversation that is just happening. Additionally, working on the development of creating a connecting background to others parts of the 'Index' universe. Other than that, keep up the great work!

Es muy bueno el fic Es el mejor asta el momento del que eh leido. Tiene mucha margen de mejora y me gusta la trama como avanza. El prota debe quedarse albino ¿porque? Por que los albinos son badas xD.

The Storydesign until now is good the only thing i would mention, is that the MC isn't really "evil" he feels more like a Anti-Hero because until now (im currently Chapter 23) he still has this Mental barrier against killing (the innocent) and still cares about people he doesn't know. Because of that he feels more of a (Anti-)Hero.

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The best way to describe this fic is "it's very... anime". And not in a good way. .

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Me Here !! I will say it again this is a masterpiece Pleade fellow readers if you read this put some good reviews cause if you've been following the book so far that mean you like it . So don't be greedy reviews are for free

Hey, uhh, I wanna volunteer as a cleaner to your fanfic, if your interested mail me: reishi.tanaka.7@gmail.com Its just that your fanfic has a good amount of potential to enter the top 10 if you fix a few things here and there, its basically a hidden gem in a hole full of crap. I'm not saying all other fanfic are crap but some of them are less than tolerable to readers, so yeah, mail me if your interested.

This is a very enjoyable and great novel you've made. I only want the Mc to end up with my Kanzaki Kaori.. ................................................................. . . . . . . .

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finally a toaru majutsu fanfic ❤️❤️ .. ................ .................. Es muy bueno el Fanfic.Esperando su pelea contra Othinus ..........................

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