LunaKindred
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God i sincerely hate the reviews that put a bunch of Emojis and leaves it like that. this fanfic is not worth the time the dialogue is lightning fast the chapters are short And the authors attention to detail is terrible, the first two chapter gives barely anything and the conversation seems hardcore forced, i would not reccomend the people who Wrote all the good reviews are probably young people who have nothing else to do
Writing quality: 1 Stability of Updates: 5 Story Development: 2 Character Design: 1 World Background: 1 If I rate 2 in story devellopment it's because the premise is here. There is a reincarnation in To Love Ru... That's it. MC visibly travel to other worlds. He has a system. Narator can't stop mentioning that every girl blush when speaking to him. Story is bland. Characters are bland. Difficult to read (not a problem of grammar, but the story make me more want to drop it the more I read it). Chapters are short. (this is not necessarily a problem)
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