To break a collar?

Follow Derric as he abruptly goes from a simple farm worker to a newfound toy for a mysterious woman that captures him for her pleasure. This is a lewd centered story that I'm writing as a fun project or so for me to do, it will contain various interests of mine as well as possible requested things if this happens to gain any fraction of traction... heh... anyway I have next to no idea if this is something I'll continue, but given how I'm enjoying writing it I think ill try for at least 20 chapters. Also, any writing tips are appreciated