Reviews of Time Space User System
Time Space User System
Billy_Castellanos
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wonderful, I like this WB aot, good story very good in general, please continue this as this is a very good story indeed, good job mr author
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Inconsistent grammar is one thing but deleting my review is another, I can't believe you your so immature deleting my review, you saw it yet you didn't reply to me and I wonder how you even have fans I bet they're all bots anyways😂😂😂😂not a single real person would want to read your book.I can't wait for your downfall
I'm loving it 💞. a nice storyline, good pace and character development, it needs development here and there, but overall story is good and I think it's gotta be better. I hope that the story will be delivered with the same momentum, neither too fast now soo slow. hopefully we can have fun filled interaction and also action. lastly wishes to the author ❣️
I honestly don't know how to feel about this. While I *did* enjoy the story, there were simply too many things that feel off: the genre of the story just keeps changing as if it grew bored with one set of toys, so it discards them and proceeds to briefly play with something else; there are plenty of characters and events that just pop out of nowhere, aren't connected to anything, and lead to no results/payoff/repercussions; there are some writing decisions that I can't even call bad - they are just baffling and make you go "...huh?" (just one example: protag, completely unprovoked, just randomly drops the bomb that he's a transmigrator and the previous body owner is dead as a doornail; and his new mother not only believes him, but also is absolutely a-okay that her child was beaten to death like a street rat, and now she's living under the same roof with a skinwalker who wear's her son's corpse like a meat puppet. And there are dozens of wtf moments like these). tl;dr - the story ain't bad, but lord have mercy on my soul is it weird as all hell
The books general idea and world building is good. Grammar needs a lot of work and is written like almost any cultivation book inhabe read but without cultivation in it thankfully( over used genre on this platform). If the grammar was fixed i would read more. read until chaoter 20 to give it fair chance but grammar is a big thing to me as a reader so if youndont mind bad grammar then its probably for you
Save your time, skip this > its just your generic system novel > the author doesnt have a solid plan for his novel, deleting some characters, and abilities of the MCs, thats just dumb (btw the novel already past 50 chapters when he did this lmao) > the mc is so childish for a reincarnator > the mc acting like a leader with his friends like he want to teach them to practise. when he himself is a weakling > the mc doesnt know how to keep his own secrets lul > hes kinda stupid tbh (mc) (there is this ability that reduce his life span if he keep using it repeatedly, guess what he just did that). this whole novel is just plain stupid tbh, i dont know what the author is thinkin ruinin his novel, you should have planned from start or even before you start just like other decent authors lul well anyways i read it and i didnt like it (ill save my review just in case the author, might delete it)
so here we start okay, to be honest I haven't read this novel but from this title it's definitely interesting so don't disappoint the reader okay and don't HIATUS / drop this novel ok ?, so my suggestion is that the author needs to go crazy up chapters and lengthen words in 1 chapter if it can't be long, at most, make it 2 chapters per day so readers will be happy and will give you support so that's all, well, don't drop it okay! hah ... the important thing is to keep the spirit in making this novel goodbye!
