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Lasyandra
LasyandraLv4Lasyandra

Yo! i don't want to read Female-lead stories so, yeah i won't read your story! BUT fear not!!! cuz i'm here to give you 1 more review so that your story get a ratings!!!

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RWBY_SPIDER
RWBY_SPIDERLv4RWBY_SPIDER

Will there be a love interest or maybe yuri?

PsyLoRD
PsyLoRDLv5PsyLoRD

[Female Lead TAG] .

Dark_lord_shadow
Dark_lord_shadowLv5Dark_lord_shadow

Ive read quite a lot of fan fics since I’ve joined WN and I have to say this is one of the best I’ve had the pleasure of reading the writing quality is great the characters are amazing and the story is absolutely incredible. Only down side is that it’s summer IRL right now so the updates are a little so but overall I’ve got to say this is a great fan fic. Ps keep up the good work author I’m loving this story. :)

AllFiction
AllFictionLv3AllFiction

*Sigh* Too bad 'the' protagonist of the work is a woman ... Not that I have any prejudice or anything, I just don't feel comfortable reading. Good luck with your story!

Photosphere
PhotosphereLv13Photosphere

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LoneWolf_Gaming_1217
LoneWolf_Gaming_1217Lv1LoneWolf_Gaming_1217

hey Author😊👋 pls go to one piece[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

FiragaFiesta
FiragaFiestaLv3FiragaFiesta

Haven't really read the fic, but since it's basically Date A Bullet but fanfic, I'd imagine the writer to fully well know what he's doing. Then I saw it's a multiverse that doesn't go into DxD, the confirmation of no Yuri and the slow pacing and I could already review this with just those alone. Writing Quality in this site is always a 3 for me regardless of whatever it is, why? Because Inkstone doesn't really provide much... flexibility in writing so yeah. Story Development is basically categorized into 2 things when talking about a fic, time skipping vodka or the slow wines. This is the slow wine so it immediately has a good ground for a good story, add the fact that it's Tokisaki "Bleh" Kurumi herself, you just can't go wrong. Character Design is fanfics with no OC is automatic 4 or 5 as long as they don't really break character, Kurumi is relatively easy to write and her personality is pretty much an anti-hero twisted justice bringing psycho. Nothing you can go wrong with as long as you know what you're doing really. Updating Stability good. Not dropped, good stuff, definitely not bad rates. It's well known in this site that as long as it's not dropped, there's updates. World Background to be honest, a multiverse fic can NEVER have 2 stars below in this category simply because the world is already done... However, you get bonus points if you expand on said universe more so. Though, I repeat, I haven't read the fanfic, I will do now. Continue the good work author~

Orange_Ghost
Orange_GhostLv13Orange_Ghost

A miracle can happen in life so I will patiently wait for author to update this story ❤️.This is the first fanfic that I vote the most so far than other ff and giving more stone still show how much I support you author.

HorrorKatze
HorrorKatzeLv4HorrorKatze

New Cover? :o Returning? ………….

_Miyasaka
_MiyasakaLv14_Miyasaka

The title says it's being rewritten. Does that still hold? if yes where can I find the rewrite?

Chaos_Prime
Chaos_PrimeLv15Chaos_Prime

Reality is finally back to give you a reality check. With a new descriptive writing style and a plethora of experience, she will rock your pitiful world. Stay tuned for a new adventure of Kuromi in this remake. You won’t be wasting time… after all, Kuromi controls it.

DragonSlayer11
DragonSlayer11Lv14DragonSlayer11

plise just update i love this story and it is heart me to see a female lead story that is'nt finnished. from your readers. 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

FiragaFiesta
FiragaFiestaLv3FiragaFiesta

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SirMemes
SirMemesLv3SirMemes

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PlebLord
PlebLordLv4PlebLord

Masterpiece~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Yup, Masterpiece~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ (I'm TOTALLY not doing this just to get a badge!) {Trust me bro!}

Dancemikacin
DancemikacinLv13Dancemikacin

Idk It's good

EverythingRelevant
EverythingRelevantLv13EverythingRelevant

Such a good fan-fic and if you dont read it you are really missing out on something great.

Black_Lazy_Cat
Black_Lazy_CatLv4Black_Lazy_Cat

this is good, please keep it going author .....................................................................................................................

TheNeeD
TheNeeDLv2TheNeeD

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