A man finds himself wandering around the city where he grew. The city was familiar yet he holds little memories of the places inside the city he calls home. As the man walks through the crowded streets of the city he calls home his mind mind began to wander, thoughts began forming in his head.
He wondered how he ended up as he is now slowly remembering memories forgotten so long ago. He the times when he was but a boy ignorant to the problems of those around him. He was born on a poor but caring family with a father to provide, a mother to care, and an elder sister to annoy. His father worked for a telephone company, his mother stays at home with a small store to manage while he and his sister goes to school. The money that his father and mother earned was enough for the family of four, it was enough feed them and to buy things that the family enjoys. This was enough for his young mind back then. But as he and his sister grew things began to change.
There you go what do you think?
Please give me some advice and some criticism and point out my mistakes.
Once again let me remind you that this is my first time writing anything. So please go easy on me.