IamHazzard
I like the way the story starts off. It kinda just throws you into it so you know what to expect. Like the first fight scene in a movie or anime. My only problems are 1. He hasn’t bought size increase for some reason and 2. Author hasn’t released new chapters in over a month. Hope he releases new chapters soon.
I'll be honest, this story isn't my cup of tea and keep hoping for something different when I keep giving books like this a try, but pretty much they are all the same. Grammar is a bit weird in the book and makes it feel choppy to read but it isn't bad. I don't see a lot of world development thus far which takes away a bit from the story. I know it takes place in Japan but I like to be able to read about the world and sights so I can get a better picture. Characters feel too stereotypical for this type of story. They aren't bad for the book, just not very deep. My other pet peeve is that system novels like this get put under Realistic fiction where they don't quite fit because systems don't exist in the real world. I think contemporary romance or similar would be more suited for this type of story.
*spoiler* I felt annoyed that koizumi slept with someone else but since she is not his girlfriend rather his friend's girlfriend I got over it. The MC is a bit stupid though and has a weak personality if not I don't see y he would agree to follow a suspicious man you just met with several girls you know you might not be able to protect into a black van.