Reviews of This time it seems I can play it like a game

Read it needs more improving and as what ms. STALKER said it seems like your improving every chapter that you wright also. Will be reading it once a week but if it won't improve I'll be going with the mist

It seems that you are improving your Writing in every chapter but you need to at least describe the character so we will have a gist on how he looks like and how he will act and how he reacts on every little things..

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I'm waiting for the next chapter when will you upload it??? I might not give you power stone again if you won't upload till tomorrow. Also you need to describe the mc