Dlysy
I love it that it is short. The story is direct and well thought out. It is not convoluted, making it an easy read yet it still maintain all the necessary ingredients to make it exciting enough. Since it is short, it leaves you feeling there should have been more. Lyla is a darling and hubby is adorable. The triplets are simply awesome and cheeky. I wish the author had shared how they dealt with the evil Mr Stan.
I really enjoyed reading your story....it was interesting and really refreshing....straight to the point. I would have loved to read more details about how Catherine and her brother were dealt with, about Braxton and his love life after everything was settled, about the Wright family.... but all in all I love it....Thank you for your good work π
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