Reviews of This Time I'll be Sweeter

Good start. The pacing, grammers and paragraph length is excellent. Continue writing at the same pace and it will definitely be engaging. There aren't any mistakes to be found honestly. Looking forward for more chaps. ❤️ ❤️

The start is promising. The English is simple and very comprehensive. The character outline is perfect. Continue like this and your novel would be top notch. Keep it up author.

Great title! The main idea is very interesting. I love the plot and the unique story line. There is no grammar and stylistic errors. I wish you more ideas!

Wow! The storyline of Kenneth and Elise just pulls me in! Looking forward to the more chapters that are to come! Good luck in the WPC author san!

A sweet romance story filled with heart break, and the need for a second chance. It is all very heart warming and the characters are intriguing. Their emotions tug on the readers’ heart strings even as it guides the readers through. A beautiful title and a beautiful read.