This Isn't What I Wished For!!!!

"Sigh" A young girl sighed as she looked unto the horizon. " I should have listened to him". Just your wannabe newby writer here, this is my first fan-fiction I've ever made so i appreciate likes and criticism. And do please tell me my mistakes please, because i honestly make a lot of them I've realized. and please comment down below if i'm supposed to put down this as an original novel or a fan-fiction because the only thing i'm going to be using that's not mine is the Zelda Franchise, the rest of the plot and the other characters are mine, even the world the MC is going to however if the world by any chance seems similar to any other novel you've read its just a coincidence i'm to young to go to jail so i wont be doing anything that can get me behind bars or seen as a rude person i do not own any of Nintendo's creations neither do i own the picture i just found it on the web and it said it may be subjected to copy right and if you don't want that picture up there just shoot me a message(comment) and ill get rid of it