The Zone

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Francesca and lucas best friends but somethings gotta be up. Comedic and fun to read it really sinks in the humor if youre american of course like me.

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The zone could be something that changes the ways of man if I may add hehe. sounds interesting to me. The prologue was spot on entertaining as it didn't have anything to do with the 1st chapter

Interestingly, interesting of these interesting lot of sci-fi novels going on now. The prologue is somewhat funny and chapter 1 also somehow funny but subtle comedy.

Wow... its something to be waited for. It's interesting to me that the prologue has somehow something to do with this romance plot you gave in chapter one.

You are simply the best, Spiderweb and then this, man its so comic... i hope there are mind-bending scenes after this one. Im totally hooked by your stories. great job.

Please be good to your characters unlike the last one where you killed all off them over and over again. I like this Francesca her name seems like she's hot.

It got me hooked... Now review mine, swap hehehe. Its funny in a way its also science fiction that prologue is spot on. Good luck at WPC, I thought Francesca could use some more lines too.

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Nice big bro, a comedy and scifi clumped up together. You really should redesign your cover. Make it more comic like how I felt reading your book.