Reviews of The World Serpent

This is a Story about an Ordinary Human turned into a Snake. I would like to warn the readers that some part of the Story might challenge the Morals of Humanity. The MC is currently in the Wild so the Human Concept of Morals will not be always applied within the Story. I will not sugarcoat my MC and the Readers can judge her however they want according to the Story they read. There is a high chance of the MC being Evil but it will depend to the interpretation of the Readers. I'm also not good in English so Grammar and Spelling Mistakes might often appear. Please Comment my Mistakes so I could fix it and Thanks for Reading my Story. [Hope you like it and Please leave a Review.]

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what can I say the minute I found this I was hooked and binge read this to its current release and I was not disappointed. The world building is amazing, lovable characters, cool action and character growth is good and fun to read. Looking forward to what is in store for Persia as she raises to the peak

Why are So many Different words Capitalized? It is Very annoying To read It like This. Also tense Keeps changing from Time to Time. Also some sentences Just end like

its a good book so far

Chapter 83: Writing quality (4.5 stars-> I will put 5 stars because there is no .5 in WN): Clear writing, small quantity of grammatical errors and the reading is fluid. Stability of updates (5 stars): 1 chapter a day Story development (3.5 stars -> 3 stars because there is no .5 in WN): It started interesting, our MC transforming into a snake and how she hunted and lost humanity little by little. Then her first companion appeared which gave the story a nice change of pace, from her solo hunting days to be with someone, returned to her her humanity. But! why only 3.5 stars? Is because of the generic development that goes after she finds the first Sapient species. She gains human form, the system starts to fade on the back, and her personality changes from a predator to a ruler and becomes "another one" of those kingdom building novels. Don't misunderstand, the story keeps being good, but, like I said it loses her uniqueness. Character design (4 stars): The MC is battling with the monster and human side inside of her and the human side is starting to win as instead of seeing creatures as food and source of power, she is beginning to debate whether to befriend or kill. Do you see the difference? From -> To "eat" or not to "eat" because of the "food" strength to-> To "Kill" or not to "kill because of the "enemies" strength. The rest of the characters haven't had extreme development yet, however they are likeable. World Background (3.5 stars -> 3 stars because there is no .5 in WN): Typical medieval fantasy world but with the main races being Elves, Dwarfs, Orcs, spirits and sapient monsters at least for the moment. Of course our MC is the "new" faction which are SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER:SPOILER: (((((((((((((((((demons))))))))))))))))))))))

Tell it to me straight author, is she gonna stay as a serpent full time or is she gonna go the way of the bad novel and turn into a human? ………………………..

Haven’t read it yet, I just really appreciate the synopsis and how it seems to be telling us that we will actually be getting a ‘monster’ as a protagonist.

Loving it so far keep it up u r continuing the story, right?

Does anyone know what happened to the author? The story is really good and I don't want it to stop. If they are sick I hope that they're feeling better. If they're not coming back, best wishes!

this story is going good so far I would tell you love me if Persian does a male interest or a male love I love the fact that she's overpowered but to the point of she still growing which is good for main character because some books tend to just have overpowered from the beginning and no longer any character development this book is different I am excited to what the other will give us next I hope she's able to fall in love though with a guy I have nothing against females but I just can't connect when it's 2 girls I'm very cliche like that overpowered mc and a even more of a powered love interest [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

One of the best stories ever written and please make sure to add romance makes the story 100% better

why is the author not having Persia put her points into body skills. I'm curious about their effects. Also it don't just feel right leaving it empty. I wanna see those stage no. rise

started reading this thinking it was gonna be another op isekai story. This story is an isekai and the character isnt overpowered but the character has the ability to grow and evolve so they gradually become stronger. the character development is really good and so is the world building. im only up to chapter 90 but this os going to be a great story.

Read it 4 times now… read spectre till 50?45? this author rolling on ideas. Btw still waiting for new chap. Or an answer (droped? Or hiatus?) if droped whana stop thinking about this cute snake. ㅠㅠ

currently at chapter 105, there are some mistakes and a lot of words repeated but thats reasonable for the word count ig it kinda stops the flow of the novel the story is good i like their point of view [img=recommend]

More more! I need to eat more of this story! this is what Every story should be like exiting. We want more updates!

I’ve read till chapter eleven so far and it’s amazing. The development of her character and the design along with the insane background details make this an awesome read. Also, if Persia is going to grow to be the same size as Jörmungandr and Persia is female while Jörmungandr is male…

A thoroughly enjoyable read. The characters are well fleshed out and feel real. The story itself is entertaining with solid pacing. The setting is interesting and well put together. The only thing it suffers from is the writing itself could be a little more polished, but it is still very readable and does not detract from the experience. Would recommend.

Honestly my first impressions aren't great it is in need of a lot of editing in sentence structure punctuation and world building. The story itself is good just needs a bit of work.