i gave you the poorest score i could, man you should make it more readable, writing everything without paragraph is a pain in the ass so as soon as i saw the single paragraph chapter i lost the will to even read it and had the urge to give you a zero score
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The writing quality significantly improved with the latest release and it looks like we're progressing into the first major arc. Let's all dump stones into this and hope for a mass release! .....
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I like the writing style of this fanfic. He takes the system of naruto and paints his own world around it. It may be a bit early to tell but I hope this novel continues to impress as the story progresses.
A little messy here and there but overall a great read, I look forward to seeing this develop. The world feels more enjoyable than the original naruto. Everything has a Fresh spin giving it a bit more of a unique feel than alot of web novels out there. Anyway keep up the good work man.
Yeah I wrote this just giving it a rating to help it get more exposure. I'd love to hear from people that aren't me and hope you enjoy my pseudo fanfic.
Well I like your work but there is a few mistake there and there, hope you can fix that.
Thank you for your work..................................................