Reviews of The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility
The World Awakens: Ten Consecutive Draws Before Invincibility
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Everything was going good till ahhh people came in and they talk on the very first day as if they all have full knowledge about the apocalypse.... children being like mommy will I grow up and become like that and those dumb dialogue ... Repeated sentences..... RUINED
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Ok, so I read up to chapter three before I found a major plothole and dropped the book. The details are in chapter 3 paragraph 15 where I left a lengthy paragraph comment regarding the plothole. It's a shame because the translation was quite good. Not near perfect or anything but still quite good. But I think that the lack of common sense overpowers the good translation and world setting. But if the author can improve on that then the novels in the future might actually be quite good. BTW, author, don't try to save this novel. I said future novels for a reason. This is beyond saving.
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there are many things which are not explained properly.... like how does others have information about catacombs and dungeons..... how does others know that he wants to become nature mage??? does everyone get extra stats when they lvl up??? if not then y do you have to lvl up??? he only got one additional stat for 5 lvls!!! I mean with his amazing luck and all if geting stats with SSS skill is sooo low then is it still SSS skil??? many discriptions are not clear.... her sister is unconscious/ in coma??? and he said they are in a hotel room!!! who is taking care of her??? what about her food for sooo many days???? lot of questions I hope Author answers
If your going to MTL, you need to have good editors. Names change from paragraph to paragraph. Nothing is consistent. There's full blown untranslated paragraphs. An entire chapter is repeated with slightly different translation. It's a mess. The sorry itself is nothing to write home about either. Constantly retconning itself; "I gained a lot of experience, and in fact I had taken a 5x experience portion too, that I made with ingredients I bought and never mentioned any of that until after it had already happened." The MC supposedly has future knowledge, but it almost never comes up after the very beginning. The MC's sister is a big concern, then ignored completely. The MC is so OP so quickly there's never any tension. The stats system doesn't get much mention, even though stats are such a big deal, and supposedly the MC is gaining extra points during level up sometimes, those are mentioned once and then never again in the preview 40 chapters. It was already a mess, then it was poorly translated on top of that.
Everyone is so knowledgeable about everything even though itβs only been a few days and they didnβt receive prior warning or anything. Not to mention, those guilds seem to be powerful right at the start but we have no idea when it was formed so it is safe to assume that they were formed right before/during the game decsended. There are multiple plot holes where the MC just magically appears somewhere. The characters talk about talents a lot like βhe probably has this talentβ when itβs unclear how they have this much information?? The translation quality in my opinion is like something that was MTLed and then edited a tiny bit. this basically means half the things donβt make sense. Currently on the latest chapter (60 something) and Iβm going to continue reading because of the Christmas event thing and all this only costs 2 coins.
