Flower_Looks
your writing layout is very satisfying, as with your story development- it's kinda finely done, with your Character design a bit tricky, But one thing I would like to suggest you to re-edit and re-visit your chapters for the grammatical mistakes, and '...' should be used more less than you usually do. overall, I hope the writer gets the deserving attention ♥️!
Well! let me give 5 stars to my own book as I am little shameless. This is not my first work but it's the first work that I have taken seriously on this platform. I am new to Web novel so please support me by your comments and please vote to my novel. I will update regularly and if you find any grammar mistakes then please point it out so I will correct them....please vote and give your honest review...it's an humble request 😆