Midnight_Raven0425
First off, the synopsis already got me hooked. I'm only a few chapters in and I already like it. I'm very curious about Farah's identity and the things she will encounter in the future. I'm also quite curious about Ysandria and what kind of mayhem she's going to unleash. Content structure wise, it's good! The grammar is organized and the story is easily understood. Keep it up Author-san!
The story is very original, and the world layout is very thorough. The character details are very well thought out. There are quite a few punctuation errors, but the story plot is solid, and I believe it has a lot of potential. Keep up the work Author! You are definitely staying on my WSA Potentials List❤️
Surprised at the same time amazed by how a 14-year-old girl wrote this kind of novel. It was a unique plot, I must say, more probably, it has the same as the one with Alpha and Mage novels. I am not saying that it is the same, it has a unique touch that you will be asking over and over again, what is next? What is the next part of the story that you had read from the very start? It was something like that. So keep up the good work with writing this craft!
Writing Quality : Marvelous, there are some minor mistakes but it doesn't hinder the reading progress. The authors style is smooth and it flows in really well. Stability of Updates: As of giving this review, it currently has 12 chapters. It is still too early to give it a proper rating but I'll give it a 5 in hopes of the author updating daily. Story Development: Decent pacing, not rushed and not too slow. I won't give a description about how the world was made nor the story because, the readers must read it themselves. If they don't read it they'll be missing out on something good ;) Character Design: I won't dive deep into this, but the characters have a veil of mystery around them and the author is slowly revealing it giving the satisfaction of discovery. Well thought of and likeable character. World Background: The novel takes place in a fantasy setting and the world is decently built, again it has only 12 chapters for me to properly give a description about the world, but it is currently looking good. Overall: A good read, must add to your library and keep up with the current chapters. ^^