The story is off to a good start, it has only been three chapters as of when i'm writing the review but i'm already anticipating the development of the plot. So far i've only learned a bit about the protagonist so there is still a lot that i'm hoping will be uncovered as the plot thickens. So far the novel is pretty good, and i'm anticipating the introduction of the Male lead.
Love the details and characters. Keep the good job. I love the pig and tiger thing its funny. I also want to be the pig type. lmao. but anyways good luck so far i've loved it.
I'll give it a try. So far the novel is pleasing me. When I have more chapters I will make a more constructive criticism.πππ For now, I'm enjoying the personality of MC. Anxious for the appearance of ML. I hope the author continues to publish and does not abandon the story. Since the other BL of this author is very good, then I have high expectations for this novel. π€π€ππ
Good world building, very detailed scenes and characters. Keep the good job. I particularly prefer more straight foward texts, but there is a lot of people out there that will enjoy this novel. :)
I like how you started the novel, and hope you continue writing this! Your writing style seems very webnovel worthy, if that makes sense, and has some very eastern elements in it that make it easy to read. I'm a little scared of BL, however, but since it was only 3 chapters, it was a reasonably safe read, and I hope your reading base grows to love this story! It's definitely nice to read!
I honestly started reading this book randomly and i am so glad i found it the world background is one of my favorite parts with the different lives that they lived and their self awareness this book is honestly a favorite of mine i just wish the updates would be more consistent
Author, when are you going to update. I really want to know, waiting is killing me. (γοΉγ) I want more. Please update more. I will support you but please don't keep procastinating.
Novel maravilhosa atΓ© o momento, ainda estou no comeΓ§o da novel mas atΓ© entΓ£o me agradou e me surpreendeu bastante <3 Author querido quando vocΓͺ irΓ‘ continuar com a novel ? eu ainda nem acabei de ler o que tem mas jΓ‘ to completamente ansioso espero de coração que tenha mais historia <3
First please let me apologize πππ to the author!!! πππ I'm so very sorry!!! I love the way you introduce the novel in your synapses. It really made me very intrigued I was also warned that it would be a slow paced story so I though " yeah! no worries, I can do slow." but what what I was not prepared is that the story is to slow to the point of crawling, 50 chapters later they are still somewhere outside, still trying to get to the Sect. OMG! I tried my best! I really tried my best to endure but I really can't. I was also in a point that I skipped a lot of paragraph just to make my reading faster but still!πππ I just had to give up! I'm really sorry! Really! really! Sorry! I will be dropping this story! I'm really traumatized by how the pace is going.π₯Ίπ€§π€§
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Just started reading and I really love this. Iβm usually not fond of wuxia novels.p, however this one is really good. Love how it starts off without MC meeting the ML the first 2 chapters. Nor of any of them kissing face at first sight. I feel this will be a slow burn, which i love.
Autor i love so much, i keep rereading it over and over i hope author relese more chapter soon ππππππππππππππ so ecited. (β Ν‘Β° ΝΚ Ν‘Β°)β(ΰΉβ’Μγ β’ΜΰΈ β§
Muito bom, Γ© muito interessante heid ler e ver se ficarei satisfeita. Tendon em contains que li o sinopse e achei bastante satisfatorio agora verei o conteido
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I like the story and the plot, but there are to many details and descriptions. I would perfer if the descriptions would be reveald gradualy as the story develops. Sometimes author uses almost all chapter for descriptions. I know that author see those decriptions important and I think that too, but its hard to rememmber everything. It makes my head spin so I skiped those parts of the storry. Anyway, Story is great and I recomend it to give it a try and read it. You will not be disapointed. π
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I love the story and the relationship between the ml and mc it's sweet, I can't wait for them to get to the sect, though that part where they all have the 'stones' I was shocked.
This story has a nice pace to it. The first few chapters have been updated to correct grammatical errors, but most of it is just an initial translation - so the sentences can be strange. That being said, it is does not detract from the story too much. I am enjoying the characters as well as the world. The author gives enough background information so you can follow along with the technical aspects. I also like that you get tidbits of the other characters' thought processes.
Estou ansiosa por mais,a histΓ³ria estΓ‘ ficando mais emocionante fazendo com queiramos mais. NΓ£o demore muito. Quero ver como vai o pequeno Song Γ© como seus poderes vai se desenvolver.
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