the wanted the many story

am not good with writing so tell me what am doing wrong i try to get people to help me but i can't i might make a book of what is going on in the story like when you read something and you wondering what happens. some mistakes and nonmistakes are made by auto correct but who Could blame it am not a good speller earn do some time i spell word write and auto correct is right there make changes this is not inappropriate but I rather live it to school to tell kid this word because that whare I heard most not good word so kid read this that am about to write - dawn you auto correct and maybe me as well there the inporpete part is gone