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Hola Author of HMI here! I love how you write. You're descriptive and you know how to flow. It's rare to find that sometimes which is a good thing. But... Word of advice before you post check your spelling, I noticed a few errors there and trust I've been there where everything seems perfect but u missed something. Also don't be too descriptive leave somethings to the readers imagination
Your writing style, author, is clean and refreshing to see. It gets the reader to experiment with the main character's bouncing, aggressive and deepening mind. Some might find it tiresome to read at first, but it starts building up into something more solid as it progresses. The way you use roman and greek mythology is also well received. It's clear that you've done your research. The Latin language only adds more flavor and characterization to the setting. Good job with this. Keep improving.
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