Md_Omr_Alpha
Don’t read this story it’s total crap. In the first chapters MC is a brute who rapes girls. And in the later chapters author just copied the entire plot idea of Endless Path: Infinite Cosmos. The author has of EPIC works really hard on his story and provides the readers with quality content so it’s hurtful to see someone just copy all his hard work. So in my opinion this novel is just copyright crap.
Sikiera two chapters per week or 4 hehehe. ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This is equivalent of listening either to a politician or a winner of a beauty pageant - brain starts melting from the amount of conflicting information and constant breaking of the rules imposed by author, by author himself. First major problem is the protagonist who, I swear, must be a corpse possessed by several different people. Constantly switches between a normal weeb, a xianxia arrogant young master who magically enslaves and rapes women for fun, a shy japanese protag who blushes from a kiss to the cheek, a bastard plotting to cuck (and possibly kill) his own father, a hypocritical whiteknight who unironically condemns others for things that he himself done with glee (again, not even a deliberate play on his part - he seriously believes it in the heat of the moment), <...>. Majority of characters feel completely undeveloped, with such unimportant things like character development and world building thrown out the window in favor of breakneck speed of unexplained...things?...happening, with everything feeling like a really short one-sentense summary of three big books. "Hello, I'm a New Unexplained Character A from the original series. I'm instantly in love with you. Because reasons. I will be forgotten and never appear again after 2~3 chapters." There's no rhyme, reason or logic to be had. Economy is weird; apparently there's cultivation shoved in there somewhere that is never really addressed; somehow there's eight different types of dragon species (with another twenty elemental, unique, and titled subspecies) that kill millions even though this is modern day world and nobody ever seen a single dragon and doesn't suspect that supernatural world exists; apparently nobody gives a damn that a borderline skyscraper just *appears* overnight in the middle of a city suburb that only has 1~2 story tall buildings; <a thousand other things>. There's also a couple *alleged* things that I haven't encountered personally, but might as well give them a mention: author may or may not delete "bad" reviews (and from my knowledge of DT, he's not a person to randomly lie about such things happening). And while I admit to not reading up to that part, apparently there was world-hopping added unannounced for no reason somewhere down the line, making a big tonal shift to the narrative. Overall it feels like author is making up the story as it goes, which isn't a bad thing in itself, but only when you don't start breaking the rules you yourself made and pulling things out of thin air. *** Still, there's plenty of chapters to go by, and spelling/punctuation/grammar are readable (heck, I'd even call them stellar if compared to usual wn trash that hurts you physically just by reading it), so there's that.
I didn't understand why the rating of this book is high. It basically looks like a superficial summary of something that could be good. The author is not concerned with adding depth, longer and more developed dialogues, personal thoughts of each character and his own traits that form his personality, there is no immersion in the story. In depth of text, it is no different from reading a medicine leaflet.
I love to give 5 stars for your novel because. The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me. I love reading it very much when I'm free. Every story plot in all the chapters is great and good. I wish I could read it every day to fill my day. I like a characteristic of all your character especially your main lead. I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work. Thank you for your hard works and don’t drop or reboot it or hiatus because I love to read your novel. Even though I spent a stone spirit I still hope you carry on your novel. I hope can read more and more a chapter every day. I hope you can release 2 chapters per day if you not too busy. Your novel makes my life colorful and not boring.
More chapters author, I remain in the best part, a Christmas gift like other fans are releasing chapters......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
This book is just not my cup of tea. Like everything written here totally goes against my views and ideologies. This is not even deserve the romance tag this is just pure lust and rape, like who the fack rapes a whole village after saving them. To make matter worse he just basically mind controls some the girls even going as far as fighting his own father just to make HIS OWN mothers as his women. Sigh..... This thing is basically a compilation of everything I dont like.