The Voices never left

What happens when you combine a boy with tree personalities, reincarnation, and a villainess? Malach has never been alone, he always had the voices in his head, He had Micah and Abel. They were his closest and only friends they were so connected to him that even after death they never left. Born again as the son of a servant serving the doomed vampire princess lets see were this life takes him. (please understand this is my first novel so Constructive criticism is appreciated. )