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IN A NUT: MC, who was abandoned at birth and later killed by his own parents, gets reborn as a PRINCE who has nothing but a small home. a caring wife AND A SYSTEM!!!, which helps him upgrade almost anything about him! Apart from the SIDE QUEST: FIND ALL THE GRAMMAR & SPELLING MISTAKES that pops up in your mind, when you read each & every line, you cannot find any fault with this work...
I donno why this work is so low in the charts although it is good work(wont say the best but still good and deserves better)... until you get a good ranking SPIRIT stones from all of my accounts will go to you... PERSONAL SUGGESTION: The site lacks "committed-to-a-single-woman" type of novels and yours have the potential to fit in very well!!! the work should go A LITTLE "above 18" rather than "for general audiences"(a pinch of romance for taste and didn't mean a smut)... GooD LucK!!
This had potential.. BUT its all pretty much run out now!!! used to be one of my favs but slow updates n plain story made me change my mind!! pros: no cliches cons: If ATLEAST cliches were present it wouldnt've been so boring I know the author is kid and you write at the free time, but just wanted to give an honest review!! you are just 14 and already writing novels that require parental guidance?!! HAHA... AWESOME if guys like us have a club , you are welcome!!
I like the idea of the guy with the hacking thing but i think you should boost out this until gets to a hundred chapter or get some chapters ready to upload before you focus on another book. Btw i like the book and can he please go to Naruto world next because i know nothing about bleach but i know alot about Naruto.