This book is quite unique to the overused female MC in a cultivation world plot line. I enjoy the fact that the ML is practically tethered to the FL and that he can save her when harm comes her way. Although their relationship is contractual as of now, it definitely won’t stay that way for long. The FL is afflicted with a poison that ruins her looks but even then the ML is still all over her - even if that may be because of her blood. I think that this novel has potential as it is right now and I hope to see more of it!
I have the feeling that all Chinese authors are simply copying each other's description. Mandatory points: - she rose from the ashes; - take revenge on relatives - Punish the ex-boyfriend; - some super op ml immediately falls in love with her. It is such a template in the description for such empty short stories. It is sad.
Okay so I dunno how tf this is that popular. Its so fcking generic its not even funny. Okay so the main problems I have is the grammar is absolute sht. The story is also all over the place making the flow awful. Another problem is how the author explains the characters features. Literally every time there mentioned its his jade like fingers, jade like legs, beautiful cherry red plump lips etc EVERY time a feature of a character is mentioned. To me this is just adding words to make the count longer, like WTF it annoys tf outta me, its just way too much. If these are improved then itll increase the quality massively in my opinion. Theres also hardly any info about her and the world shes in. I mean it went straight into action without explaining anything Not trying to hate. These are my honest opinions
It has good parts and some of the character interactions are really cute or silly. The beginning is nonsense. The middle is good. The end went way out of scale and made no sense suddenly breaking the world setting and abandoning the plot in favor of a train wreck. In all a frustrating mix of good and terrible.