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Reviews of The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto FanFic

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The Unknown Goddess: A Naruto FanFic

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Hazielr
HazielrLv5Hazielr

A amazing work!! A novel who you should read.. thanks for the good fic.!! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

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Revenge_Knightess
Revenge_KnightessLv11Revenge_Knightess

This novel is quite a different take on the Naruto world than what you would expect, it is quite character driven and the main focus is on the MC. So far not much can be said about the world other than it's the Naruto's one, as fan I don't suppose you actually need the world being described to you. Story development is slow-paced as the main focus is on the MC, and how she interacts with the world around her and her experiences, much about her past is still unknown. So far the story does follow some of the Naruto plot given there are some changes as the MC is an OC. Warning..This story may not be for everyone; it's not what you would expect when reading a Naruto fan-fic, but it does make you wonder more about the inner feelings of the characters other than the usual, I want to be hokage, and friendship etc. Grammar is quite good, I'm not a grammar-Nazi, writing style is story dependent in this case it's a bit emotionally heavy so far. All in all it has potential, also for those looking for an OP character she is very OP.

Xrhbd
XrhbdLv11Xrhbd

Just finished chapter 1 and it’s not looking good. Let’s not forget that the man is a kage. So him just saying year alright to that confession is kinda not right. He would at least use Genjutsu to get all the info out first then talk. The parents being Tsunade and Jiraiya is a good new twist I haven’t seen before. And I feel like the MC is a tad bit slow with the whole existing before part. But apart from that the rest is good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m still gonna read a bit more to decide if imma stick to this but I hope the story sticks a bit more to the OG characters personalities. But overall it’s an ok start, I’ve seen worse.

infinity_hero01
infinity_hero01Lv14infinity_hero01

first 15 chapters brought tears to my eyes, the story is very relatable for some and you can feel ithit your soul. In other words well done .

Whit3Tig3R
Whit3Tig3RLv1Whit3Tig3R

I kinda excused MC abusing someone close to her first couple of times but further on she's getting Sakura levels of annoying, especially since you take into account that she herself was abused. I hope she comes to realization that she's continuing the cycle, maybe in further chapters(by hurting someone more then intended etc.) Overall I enjoyed the read, hope there's update sometime in the future

_1Ghosty1_
_1Ghosty1_Lv4_1Ghosty1_

I've had to have read the at least 4 times. it is by far the best book I've found on this app, I just wish I it would update more often. Ps. author if you read this, please don't drop it.

Grey_Mortem
Grey_MortemLv13Grey_Mortem

This is a great Naruto fanfic I absolutely recommend To Anyone \(. /. But I must ask is this dropped

Woodyrascel
WoodyrascelLv12Woodyrascel

my dude....you drop this story and I'll drop you from a skyscraper. ..well in my head since I have no idea where you are...but it's the thought that counts.....seriously don't stop!!!!!

mAlexmsTr
mAlexmsTrLv1mAlexmsTr

i only wish that mc is not bound by anyone, imean it's okay if she have a lover but don't reason that lover for her to live not the entire story pls😐, not that i hate hinata...., I just hate her bc she's so timid aaaaa i hate that but no offend i just like to say my thoughts

Fallingpheonix
FallingpheonixLv14Fallingpheonix

I really enjoy this book, can't wait till there is more and to see where you go with the story line, especially at the chunnin exams and how you'll do the 3 year timeskip.

Scarlettwitchlover
ScarlettwitchloverLv14Scarlettwitchlover

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Marco_Mar
Marco_MarLv1Marco_Mar

You should really update it more frequently please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

Fallingpheonix
FallingpheonixLv14Fallingpheonix

Alot better then I was expecting for a fanfic type of novel, but now im hooked and want more.... well, it's in my library now and ill definitely be excited for chapters that will come

BlackPhantasm90
BlackPhantasm90Lv4BlackPhantasm90

Why are the sentences mostly 3 to 4 words? --------------------------------------------- --------------------------------------------- ------

RedGrayce
RedGrayceLv1RedGrayce

One of my favourite Naruto Fanfics I've ever read ,>¥.>¥,+%,,,+%,,%+,+%.+%|.+%,+%.¥%...>.¥%.%¥.¥%.¥%+%.%¥.%¥.¥%.%.¥%..¥%.¥%.¥%,¥%,,%¥,%¥.¥>

NineYangCultivator
NineYangCultivatorLv3NineYangCultivator

This story is pretty good. In the beginning, the mc is depressed, but that's only for a short period of time. After that though, the story just gets sweeter and sweeter. The interactions with the mc's love interest (I won't tell you who) are just too wholesome!

Panda_
Panda_Lv13Panda_

I have a lot of things to say about the story, the characters, the world building, and most importantly the MC but it boils down to 2 things, 1. my love for it i can't get enough of the story. 2. my hate for you for playing with my heart and emotions because every time I read it I lose half a box of napkins from the tears and I am the kind of person who doesn't cry a lot but i still love the story and I hope you continue writing this masterpiece of a FF and I hope you have a good day

ChaMy
ChaMyLv4ChaMy

Gostei de como ele escreveu o drama da MC... confesso que chorei.........................................................................................

Avaritia_0010
Avaritia_0010Lv4Avaritia_0010

Awesome story with great fight scenes with sweet romance and a mc with a tragic backstory that made me cry It's a really awesome story just ignore the hateful comments of whiny b*tches Try to give this story a shot try to read about 10 chapters And if you like it just drop the story and don't ruin it for others.

Stieborn
StiebornLv4Stieborn

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