Archer_Phoenix
This novel is quite a different take on the Naruto world than what you would expect, it is quite character driven and the main focus is on the MC. So far not much can be said about the world other than it's the Naruto's one, as fan I don't suppose you actually need the world being described to you. Story development is slow-paced as the main focus is on the MC, and how she interacts with the world around her and her experiences, much about her past is still unknown. So far the story does follow some of the Naruto plot given there are some changes as the MC is an OC. Warning..This story may not be for everyone; it's not what you would expect when reading a Naruto fan-fic, but it does make you wonder more about the inner feelings of the characters other than the usual, I want to be hokage, and friendship etc. Grammar is quite good, I'm not a grammar-Nazi, writing style is story dependent in this case it's a bit emotionally heavy so far. All in all it has potential, also for those looking for an OP character she is very OP.
Just finished chapter 1 and it’s not looking good. Let’s not forget that the man is a kage. So him just saying year alright to that confession is kinda not right. He would at least use Genjutsu to get all the info out first then talk. The parents being Tsunade and Jiraiya is a good new twist I haven’t seen before. And I feel like the MC is a tad bit slow with the whole existing before part. But apart from that the rest is good. Don’t get me wrong, I’m still gonna read a bit more to decide if imma stick to this but I hope the story sticks a bit more to the OG characters personalities. But overall it’s an ok start, I’ve seen worse.
I kinda excused MC abusing someone close to her first couple of times but further on she's getting Sakura levels of annoying, especially since you take into account that she herself was abused. I hope she comes to realization that she's continuing the cycle, maybe in further chapters(by hurting someone more then intended etc.) Overall I enjoyed the read, hope there's update sometime in the future
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I have a lot of things to say about the story, the characters, the world building, and most importantly the MC but it boils down to 2 things, 1. my love for it i can't get enough of the story. 2. my hate for you for playing with my heart and emotions because every time I read it I lose half a box of napkins from the tears and I am the kind of person who doesn't cry a lot but i still love the story and I hope you continue writing this masterpiece of a FF and I hope you have a good day
Awesome story with great fight scenes with sweet romance and a mc with a tragic backstory that made me cry It's a really awesome story just ignore the hateful comments of whiny b*tches Try to give this story a shot try to read about 10 chapters And if you like it just drop the story and don't ruin it for others.
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