Archer_Phoenix
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The writing style is what I'm attracted to a novel/fanfic and really thought I've found another hidden gem but her telling him everything ruined it for me. You see, I'm not a fan of MC sharing their knowledge about their life in another world, much less telling her about the Naruto world being an anime or manga, so what would happen now? tell him how he died and how Tobi/Madara was none but Obito? and how Sasuke betrayed the village and how Jiraiya died and how Naruto became the hero? I'm sorry I've to dropped, didn't finish reading chapter 1, gave up when she revealed everything also I thought she was having memory problem
Ok- Wow. Just wow. This fan fiction is absolutely well written. I love the fluff so so much, it makes my heart tingle a bit (´∩。• ᵕ •。∩`) Overall, I highly recommend this to anyone that likes yuri. But except one thing... When is author-sama going to update the next chapter?! (〒﹏〒) But even so, I will still wait! ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ
really really good. the interactions with every character is pretty much on point I wish this would carry on. I love the cute moments the cool moments especially the parts where I thought "thats what I always thought" when mc finds the easiest solutions that even I wondered why noone thought of them in the anime. the mc is so awesome she grows as a character throughout the whole time and the growth really hits the spot, overall really love this and really wishing for more.
Hello Author. I apologize if the comment has bad or strange grammar. English is not my first language. About your story, it's amazing. I just loved the richness of details and creativity captivated me a lot. It is a very good story. But, forgive me, I won't be able to follow your story anymore. It is not your mistake, but mine. I think my mindset is too weak. I'm feeling bad. I know it is a naive thought. But I don't think I'm ready for the story yet. Excuse me. Your story is great.
The first few chapters are really depressing.For those who don't like the depressing novels, it might turn you off.But I recommend you to continue read it.After the first couple of chapters, as the story process, there will be no more and will be fun to read and will be exciting (at least for me).You might cry at the first couple of chapters but as I say, there will be no more later as I have read. As for the author, it's good.Keep Going and hope you will not drop off like a lot of other fanfics. 😸🙌