Its pretty nice effort ! There should be more emotions like when they met accident, here you should add more feels and emotions .
The story is nice but it can be improved too farđđđđ
Overall I like it ,character names were goodđ€đ»
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I am a teenage student and I really like the thought you have conveyed ! Will be anxiously waiting for your next story !
I think you should try a novel too
I think its a good story for teens or kids ,its simple with a message
But overall I like the roles of different character
You can write more better ! Waiting for next story with improvement!