Cakeisthebomb
This needs an editor. The story is interesting to me, but the writing quality is low. Edit the story for consistency, grammar, and spelling. Make an appendix with the power levels, so people can look a that before the chapter where the MC explains the power levels to her new students. Also the people other than the MC will need descriptions. Names, ages, gender and power levels are all that is discussed. In order to keep track of characters I need more than that to visualize them. Otherwise the names just blur together and I can't differentiate them.
Love it! Overall a vary good story/novel. Writing is solid with only few mistakes. Very fleshed out story, characters and world story. My only concern is with some characters. It is hard to remember all of them. My advice for You is this: It is of great help for the author to have a notebook with all characters( their history, character, relationship, etc.). With it You can make some sort of glossary for Your novel. Then You can put it somewhere for us( readers).
Amazing!!😍😘😘 Just can't wait for next update!! It is just amazing and fantastic story line with lots drama and emotions flowing in it.. it just makes one so mesmerized with the story that it makes you feel as u are the protagonist and the story revolves around u.. I request the writer to have mass release for next few updates. Just loved it 😘😘😘
This is so good and I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you update soon. It's been so long. I love how she got someone who loves her and family to be there for her. She is really nice to people who doesnt hurt her and she did protect the weak. I guess she the person that everyone wants to be. Admirable and strong. ❤❤🥰🥰