Good fanfiction, so far the story is decent and the gramma is good. The interactions between Madara, Obito and Itachi is also really. Its kinda annoying that they got nerfed but it makes sense since they would have bodied anyone by the time they would be in U.A. I just wish there was more to it, like an actual training art and seeing how they actually work on their abilities since it skips all that stuff and goes straight to U.A
This fanfic is pretty well done compared to a bunch of trash on this website. The writing quality is pretty good grammar wise and I haven't really noticed that many mistakes. The amount of chapters updated is kinda trash because only one chapter appears ever 2 - 4 days sometimes a little longer. This is a problem I think as to why this book doesn't get as many views as it should be. If you could do a chapter a day that would make this fanfic a lot more popular, but if it becomes quantity over quality this story will die. The story development has a nice pace in my opinion. Its not super slow but maybe a little too fast for some people. The character design is like-able. I am enjoying it and like see what happens. I don't know if there is that much development at the moment but when I am writing this there is only 16 chapter. So far the characters are pretty much the same from when they are reborn to now(Chapter 16). The World background is not really that well developed since a lot of places aren't really described. It kinda makes sense since its a fanfic but I would at least like to know a little more about the house that the MC's live in. But that might just be me. *PLEASE UPDATE MORE* thx Disclaimer: I am not the best reviewer by far but this is definitely one of the most thought out reviews I have done. :)
a Pleasant surprise in general terms, I will give my opinion for each aspect Writing quality: Since I use a translator (nothing like reading in your mother tongue) I am not very aware of how his grammar was, so I gave him a four star rating. Publication time: it is good but it does not have a fixed schedule, it seems to do a chapter every 4 days with occasional double chapters. Plot Development: Fairly balanced, There are no fights so far and had to go linearly to the original work, but has made daring but necessary decisions, such as removing 3 characters from the main plot and making an OC, quite understandable if we have Keep in mind that you have to handle 3 characters that would be considered main. Still to see how he will continue to handle the 3 Uchiha but for now I do not see many problems with them. Character design: The MCs exceeded my expectations, each one is psychologically separated from their original version, although if they share some aspects, the uniqueness of the reincarnated continues to prevail, something that is hardly seen in Fics. You can see the personality of the main 3, Madara is active and a leader but without being openly, Obito is emotional but without crossing the line of exaggeration and Itachi is serene and more polite. Regarding the secondary characters, little has been seen of how they have been impacted by the MCs, although it is noted that if they were a great influence on others, since Madara brought out the competitive side of Midoriya shows that the Mcs are not mere spectators. World Background: I think it is the poorest thing that this work has, it does not provide very detailed descriptions and it depends a lot on whether readers have seen the anime or read the Boku no hero manga, although it is true that it is a bit early to be able to give an optimal rating, But has not given many sparks in this regard.