24 Madara's Next Challenger? The Unexpected?

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The moment Madara Kicked me into the air, he launched up and twisted his body and rotates at high speeds, "Leaf Hurricane!"

I then feel his kick shatter my guard and it crashes into my stomach causing my entire body to vibrate from the impact. The strength of this kick. It shouldn't be possible at our sharing's current level. How?

That is my final thought as I rocket through the air and crash into the ground. Unconscious and defeated.

--Madara's POV--

Looking down at Obito's unconscious and beaten body I feel a twinge of sadness and regret. I quickly wipe those feelings away as he was the one who challenged me.

Obito is quickly carried off the field by two teachers and the students all erupt in cheering and chanting, "Madara! Madara! Madara! Madara! Madara!"

I slight smile creeps onto my face as I look around at all the people cheering my name and acknowledging my strength. Say what you want but it feels good.

I then turn and begin to walk away when I hear from behind me, "Madara! Good fight! What was final move? Was it part of your quirk? Couldn't you have gone a little lighter on Obito?"

Gasps from the crowd state, "Incredible! It's the big three!"

"Incredible! Look it's Lemillion!"

"No way, Nejire's here? Why did they come?"

"Idiot, I did some research and the Uchiha brothers are actually Nejire's younger brothers through adoption!"

"No wonder there so strong! Obito may have been beaten but did you see how fast he was?"

"Look! It's Mirko!"

I then turn and find myself face to face with the schools three strongest students. My older sister Nejire, the strongest student Mirio, and then Mirko all wearing in there Hero uniforms.

Mirko has a stunning athletic build with muscular arms and legs. She has beautiful tanned skin, enchanting red eyes which are tilted slightly inwards, thick long eyelashes, and gorgeous straight white hair reaching down past her waist. On her head, she has a pair of long white rabbit ears pointing upwards with a slight crook.

Ignoring Nejire's questions as usual I nod, "Hey Neji, how are you?"

She then tilts her head, "I'm doing well. Oh! I'm going to go check on Obito!"

The moment she runs past me to head to the medical, Rumi seems to come out of a trance. She then walks over to me with a large mechanical grin on her face. "Your Madara right? Fight me!"

"What!!! Madara's going to fight Rumi???"

"Madara you've got this! Show the Big Three that us first yearers aren't to be slept on!"

The bleachers erupt in roars of excitement.

I however, barely notice. I find myself enchanted by that beautiful smile. Something about it...

Snapping out of it, I allow my expression to fully contort into an battle hungry smile. I feel the blood pumping through me as I take in the opponent before me. One of the strongest in the school!

What shocks me, is seeing that she has the exact same look in her eye and in her smile that I do.

'He/she is just like me!' Both think at the exact same moment.

Unable to wait another moment, Rumi lunges forward at incredible speeds nearly disappearing from everyone's vision.

Not mine however. With my sharingan activated I manage to react just in time an cross my arms in front of my chest blocking the kick.

What I did not expect however, is the power behind her kick. The moment her foot connects into my arms I feel the bones creak and almost bend from the power.

The power behind her kick sends me flying through the air for nearly 20 yards. As I am flying through the air I manage to flip and land on my feet. It doesn't end there however, I continue to slide nearly another 10 yards before I come to an stop.

The crowd roars in excitement while Mirio simply signs and walks off to the side to watch.

Rumi then shouts, "Madara! I challenge you! Fight me!"

Aizawa then looks over to me for confirmation. I however, remain silent for a moment processing my thoughts.

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Yes! I accept! Come Rumi! Show me your power!" With that, I lower my head and blitz forward.

Rumi, with an identical smile as to mine, replies, "Gladly! Come at me Madara!"

She also dashes forwards towards Madara. Before even a second passes we clash.

--3rd Person. (I want to try something new! Also for music, listen to Rustage, "Unit" link in comment.)

The two powerhouses clash, but the outcome is one sided. Rumi completely overwhelms Madara as her attacks are far more powerful.

Ducking beneathe her first blow Madara then launches a punch towards her torso. Using the momentum from her roundhouse, Rumi rotates her body out of the way and avoids the attack.

Then with a spinning motion, she launches another powerful kick straight towards Madara's head despite being mid air. Realizing that it would be impossible for him to dodge, Madara then momentarily activates Susanoo to block the kick.

Immediately after he blocks, Madara then lowers Susanoo and counter attacks with a roundhouse kick into a spinning heel.

Ducking under Madara's first kick, Rumi then is caught by the spinning heel kick. It strikers her in the chin and sends her sliding backwards.

As she comes to a stop, she then brushes her chin and looks down to reveal blood on her hand which has come from her mouth. Her smile widen's, "That's an impressive defense."

Madara chuckles, "Your not bad yourself." To himself though, he was amazed, 'If it weren't for Sasoono I would have already lost! If this keeps up I'll be in trouble. She is far superior to me in all aspects except reaction speed.'

Without wasting anymore time, the two then re engage. Ducking her kick Madara then punches toward her chin only to be blocked. He then quickly raises Susanoo once again just in time to block another crushing attack to his ribs.

Sweat begins to gather on Madara's forehead as the fight grows more and more intense. As the fight drags on, Madara is forced to use Sasoono more and more barely being able to keep up.

But instead of fear, he feels pure and utter joy. Finally! An opponent who truly pushes him further than ever before!

Madara is quickly being driven back, towards the wall. To avoid getting pinned, Madara then launches a high side kick towards Rumi's head. Rumi then ducks just as he expected.

He then quickly transitions from a sidekick to a 580 flip kick. Using Rumi's shoulders as leverage, Madara launches himself upwards before twisting mis arin and launching a powerful strike towards the back of her head.

Rumi then lowers her head further to avoid the strike. Not only does she avoid the attack, but now she launches a powerful back kick.

Madara, is unable to react in time due to his angle of attack hiding hers from view. The moment he lands, her foot slams into his stomach causing him to cough up blood and lurch forward.

Using her momentum, she then swivels her foot spinning her body incredibly fast and launching a sid kick straight into Madara's ribs sending him flying and crashing into the ground.

"Ha! Haahahahahaha!" Madara erupts into laughter as he pulls himself up. He is now covered in blood and bruises. He then shouts, "Rumi!!!! I will not lose here! Come! Let us dance more together!" Then, something surprises Rumi.

Madara's right eye changes. Formerly both eyes were blood red with two black tome, however, his right eye is shifting. The two black tomes then seem to melt and spread to cover the entire eye. Then, after a moment it returns to the Tome, however this time, there are three!

"Finally! I have broken through! Now! To end this!" Madara then rushes forward. However, his new speed is completely uncomparable to his former speed. He is now tremendously faster!

Mirko shocked by this development, barely manages to pull back in time to dodge his first punch which nearly slammed into her chin. 'It's not just his speed! It's also his strength! However....'

Now recovering from her shock, her eyes grow even wilder! This man! He is incredible!

Now, ready to re engage, she launches herself forward. The two clash, thi time however, it is far more even, Madara, using the powerful and merciless style of MA he learned, is now able to keep up with Mirko.

However, there is one downside. Since he only has a single eye at three tome, the stamina drain to use the effects of the three tome are incredibly high! Because of this, he is unable to use Sasoono along with the three tome sharingan as it would drain him to empty nearly instantly.

The two are now covered in bruises and blood. However, even with his boost, Madara is still weaker.

Ducking under her next attack, Madara finally slips up and takes one too many steps back and falls off balance.

Rumi then leaps above hima and shouts, "It's over. It's my win! Luna Fall!" She shouts as she then leaps into the air and flips before catching Madara mid fall win a powerful axe kick. At this moment, his sharingan deactivates from overuse.

Getting slammed into the ground, madara groans as he realizes that he's been defeated.

The impact of the blow causes the ground in the stadium for a 25 by 25 foot radius to shatter and create a large 8 foot deep crater.

The crowd then erupts.

"What happened?"

"Is it over?"

"Who won? I can't see!"

"Holy shit! How strong was that attack?"

"Those two are monsters!"

"I could barely even see the fight!"

Finally, after the dust settles, it reveals two figures in the center of the crater. On the ground battered bloody and beaten, is Uchiha Madara who is completely drenched in sweat. Sitting on top of his chest and using her arm to keep him pinned to the ground by the neck, is a clearly tired Rumi.

"It's over Madara, it's my win." She states her eyes glittering in joy, her smile wide in satisfaction and her body heaving from lack of breath. Despite her also being wounded and tired, there was still an obvious difference in strength between the two. However Madara's Sasoono had mostly been able to make up for it.

--Madara's Pov. (Song End)--

Many thoughts run through my mind laying pinned to the ground by Rumi, but of all those thoughts, a single one dominates them all.

Until now, I seemed to not have noticed how beautiful and just perfect the woman who had defeated me was. She is strong, loves to fight, is obsessed with victory, and through our fight, I felt something I have never felt before.

I felt a strong heat in my chest. I felt some sort of incredible desire to clash with her again. But not in the way that I usually did. I felt as if I wanted to never stop fighting her.

After a moment I realize that this is what Obito described how he felt about Ochaco. 'Shit! Damn you nejire. My poor desserts.'

[lol :(::::::::: Rest In Piece Madara's delicious desserts.]

Taking a deep breath I sigh before stating, "Rumi."

"Hm?" She asks while tilting her head to the side puzzled.

I then look at her in those beautiful red eyes with a serious expression "I'm not very good at this. But, I have this feeling that I want to fight with you eternally. Not like how I usually feel during a fight. I genuinely never wanted it to end.

I'm not very good with this sort of thing so I'm not going to beat around the bush. Rumi, I have fallen in love with you. Will you be my girlfriend?"

The crowd goes dead silent hearing this all listening silently. All of Class 1-A just have their mouths hanging open in shock. Itachi can't believe what he's hearing.

Of the three of them Madara is the one he least expected to fall in love. Even he was more likely to fall in love then the ever battle hungry Madara.

Mirio is also looking at Madara in shock and newfound respect. Not only had Madara impressed him with his strength, he

Rumi, hearing this, turns bright red in embarrassment. Her ears flatten at the side of her head as her eyes widen and she covers her mouth with her hands.

Her entire life, most others had been off put with her battle fanatic attitude, she had made a few friends like Nejire and Mirio, but even then there was no one who understood her.

She then looks down at the man beneath her. Bare chest and beaten. despite his current condition she suddenly realized how incredibly handsome he was.

That combined with his strength, and love for battle definitely interested her. But then she remembers his words about the connection. She then turns even redder, the truth was... She had felt it too.

She then replies, "Yah, I'd like that. I felt the same way."

(Author- Hey what do you all think? I really like it but let me know!

What's ya'll think of the third person fight? I thought it went well!

Would you like more observer POV's like in the 0-Pointer fight in future fights?

I hope you all enjoyed!)

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