Alancaster
Before you start, read this review! [Review date: 22-06-2021] Passed after the editing. GOOD POINTS: - Great flow - Perfectly placed dialogues - Characters are interesting - Plotline has magic, love, romance, and suspense in it - REMEMBER, there's a story going on within the story - There's a mysterious glimpse revolving around the characters. - Transmigration is done very well and the hooks are well placed. - One can connect with the FL very well with her 'human-ness.' WEAKNESS: - Little punctuation errors. - Capitalization at few places. If you are aiming to read n exciting + dramatic + really interesting transmigration pick this. Believe it's amazing with the 'story within the story' aspect.
You should be reading this! Really, skip the reviews and add to your collection! The writing is well edited, not pedantic and easy to follow; the plot is intriguing, addicting and coherent! It's a page turner! I really liked how the novel started and how promising it is. Good luck author-san! I wish you success!
The Female protagonist was saved, but she doesn't know it. I'm waiting for the moment when she figures it out :D The author took a common scenario, like an otome villanness novel, and put a spicy twist to it. Nesrin is soooooooo cute and adorbsballs. But too bad she had to take the fall. Ugh. In any case, I am looking forward to how the story goes.
ooh, this is a new approach for an isekai story. (if I am correct) two girls were transported into a novel, and the plot kinda reminded me of that one barbie film. Anyway, the story feels smooth. I really love the twist you add here in your novel. In all honesty, it amazed me. I left my mouth hanging wide open while reading this!
I've read your story and It's well written which is quite impressive... It does only have 7 chapters as of now, so I can't judge the book too well as it's only just the beginning stages, but overall I think it's great, This book is certainly a rare find... I hope you the best of luck in your journey as an author. And kudos to you!!
You know what, I can say that I pretty much hooked on the story. It's just great, the way it is written and the way the character is introduced. I like it very much. Wish there were a lot of chapters, can't wait to see what will happen next to Nesrin. To the readers that reading this review, give this novel a try as I know you wouldn't regret it just like...
Honestly, I loved this book. ❤️ Plot is intriguing and the characters are mostly well versed and detailed. The book has a great feel to it, although you might get lost at times towards the end. I really did enjoy the whole experience! I loved the FL throughout the book and the ML is intense and untrustworthy at times. It did keep me on my toes the whole time! My only critique is that I would say that the end felt rushed. I did not get the great detailed information the author was able to convey earlier in the story… they might have just been ready to get the book over and done with so they could move on, so I get it. :)) But I really, well and truly did enjoy it!❤️
This novel deserves more views! It manages to grabs the reader's attention from the get-go. With a great plot, intriguing characters, and each chapter leaving the reader in suspense and craving more, it can't be rated other than 5/5. I'm a sucker for any fantasy-romance novels, but this one takes the cake! I literally couldn't put it down and am currently caught up at chapter 103. Looking forward to future updates and seeing how the story progresses. Thank you for sharing your book with us author!