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Reviews of The Tylingariea Epic

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The Tylingariea Epic

Brandongould94

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Limpin_Technocat
Limpin_TechnocatLv3Limpin_Technocat

Excellent work on this novel! :D The world building is amazing, very much so. Easy to follow plot, awesome characters and an overall exciting read! :D I totally enjoyed it ;D

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Lazy_leon
Lazy_leonLv13Lazy_leon

A excellent and awesome concise plot summary of the book. My evaluation of the work is that it's great Iwill recommendation it for the audience that uses this app.

Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

The story is high class! I am very delighted to see something awesome and niche! I gotta say I am impressed with the author's work and may you reach one million views in no time! Good luck buds!

Mirilidan
MirilidanLv3Mirilidan

Cool story, congrats on writing the entire book, I like the characters and world building you did very much, and the names were cool too. Some chapters were a little strange as they would sometimes only be 1 sentence long or a regular length but a single long paragraph. I am glad I read it nonetheless but fix those things and people will enjoy the book much more.. Great work author

Easy_Tiger
Easy_TigerLv1Easy_Tiger

This work has the word epic written all over it. One can’t help but be in awe at the effort the author has gone into to create such an expansive story and fictional world filled to the rim with a diverse cast of colorful characters. Moves at a cracking pace from the start as the cast is introduced and the reader is thrown into the thick of dangerous and unique world. The writing is top-tier and I loved devouring it. I’ve only read the opening 5 chapters but already I am hooked and will continue reading on more. To any potential readers, give this one a try! You won’t regret it. Your total enjoyment is guaranteed!

The_Mad_Titan
The_Mad_TitanLv11The_Mad_Titan

The author does a great job with world-building and follows it up with decently written characters and a good storyline. But, I feel the first few chapters should be looked at again, cause that invites your reader, it was a bit confusing for me at first because of the grammatical errors and inadequate spacing but got better as i continued. In summary the author did a good job with this

LordSputnik
LordSputnikLv12LordSputnik

The Good: Excellent world building! The author has created multiple worlds inside one story that are well thought out! The characters, while not exactly original, are given more than enough history to stand on their own. The Bad: It reads a bit like a history book at first... Having one giant paragraph for a chapter makes it a chore to read. Don't create new chapters just to put a title... Chapters are also quite short usually. The Neutral: Having a big grand idea is great, but tying it together is always a challenge. Keep at it! Try and work on your chapter structure some, it's hard to read just a single large paragraph without proper line breaks.

Brandongould94
Brandongould94AuthorBrandongould94

This is brandon gould the writer of the Tylingariea Epic and thank you to all who have read and reviewed this book. I have entered the Webnovel Spirngry contest and am working on my entry Born of Flesh and Flame so if anyone wants to check that out please leave any advice that you can give me in reviews or comments of the book thank you Brandon Gould

_VA_
_VA_Lv4_VA_

I would honestly say, without the grammar mistakes, this book would be 5/5, with good narration, decent story development, character design, and world background. The author definitely put a lot of work into this, and it shows.

Chainslock
ChainslockLv4Chainslock

So far, so good. It seems the author have written this book and outlined years ago. The concept and plot speaks for itself. I can’t stress that enough. I could tell that the World building is pretty expansive as well, much as the character design. Grammar could use some work though. I suggest getting an editor would do, or to proofread. Best of luck in your writing.

Kamatis
KamatisLv3Kamatis

Yeet!!! Sorry for the late review, I fell asleep, hahaha. Anyways, I read the synopsis at first and It's really interesting, hahaha. I noticed a bit of error here and there but It could easily be proofread, brother. The characters, as well as the MC himself was amazingly portrayed, good job on that!!! Also, your naming sense is weird and unique, but because It's unique, readers can easily remember It. Keep up the good work!!!

NotUse
NotUseLv4NotUse

This book has an interesting plot. The writings are well thought and creative, the world background and characters are profoundly described. Nice work👍👍👍

Kid_Phantom
Kid_PhantomLv3Kid_Phantom

First I would give this book a 5/5 because of your world building is lit, interesting character design, and the story line is interesting. Your writing and description skillz are off the charts I am recommending this to my friends continue doing you.

Blank_thought
Blank_thoughtLv10Blank_thought

The story has great potential, the plot is good and very intriguing, I like it. I also want to say that I really admire your naming style, very unique and memorable. However, the story is not that easy to read, I had to repeat some parts 3 times to fully understand the meaning of it, and you don't want your reader to misunderstand what you are trying to say. I believe that you should start editing the story and you really should focus on grammar mistakes. but overall it's great ^^

_Neeraj_
_Neeraj_Lv2_Neeraj_

Well I consider it a Pretty good novel. But there are many place it needs Improvement for like Character development and The Background Outline. Yeah sometimes in the novel the communication between the author and read can be hard but the potential is very good. It will take you attest first few chapter then you will get hang of the story and it won't be too confusing.

The_Cheshire_Cat
The_Cheshire_CatLv11The_Cheshire_Cat

When I started to read it, it felt little overwhelming with some of the lines being quite a long and you tried to make sense what was happening as the first five chapters felt like they went from one to hundred really quickly but when you slowly for used to it it was a little bit easier to read. But yeah, the first chapters left me somewhat confused about what was happening that I had to backtrack slightly and pick up the important parts. Then it made sense again, so I would suggest to split some of the larges lines into two and place focus on the dots, spacing, and commas to make it somewhat easier to read. Otherwise, the world background was interesting, and it could be improved still, but I'm at chapter ten still, so I don't know how it looks at the later chapters. But the character development was good, and the focusing on feelings, etc. was well written and really good, so it's obviously one of the strong points of this story.

Breno_Ranyere
Breno_RanyereLv4Breno_Ranyere

The idea is interesting, with trying to set up six characters' backstories and try to show how they merge together to tell an epic. There is a lot of creativity and a deep interest in building up the lore. My biggest problem is that there is a little too much plot and very little character at the start. It felt like the entire first part was "This happened, then this happened, then this happened." But not really giving a lot of reason to get invested in the cast. It was kinda overwhelming. Also, the plot kinda moves a tad too fast at times.

shadowdrake27
shadowdrake27Lv3shadowdrake27

I will explain each category and why I rated things the way I did. I should note that I didn’t read everything. Of over 200 chapters (which is impressive), I read about 10. Writing Quality: Well, I could read it. I hate to give such a low rating here, because everything else about this book is good, but it was very hard to understand what the author was trying to say. For the most part I was able to figure it out, but the grammar, spelling, typos, etc were numerous and everywhere. I suggest proof reading and taking care to clean up the writing you have. It is a really good story that is marred by writing that is hard to decipher. 1/5. Stability of Updating: This category seems useless, in my opinion, but the author writes and updates frequently. 5/5. Story Development: The story moves at a good pace. I love that it is organized with a prologue that hints at the main plot, each backstory first, then the characters all together for the main plot. There were some holes in the plot, such as characters that were introduced in the prologue and then didn’t seem to age over the 100 years until the story starts, but over all the story is fantastic! 4/5. Character Design: Once again, the author did a good job here. The characters are all distinct and different. They each have their own chapter to give their background and why they are even in the party (why don’t more people do this is long novels with a ton of characters? It made it possible to remember who the characters were despite having a lot of them). One note, where the author lost a point from me, is that it seems like more love was given to the background stories and worlds than the characters themselves. This could change as the story goes on, but initially the back stores are more about the worlds they come from than the specifics of the characters. Still, I got the jist of what each character was supposed to be like or represent/do in the party. 4/5. World Background: Yeah. This is a 5/5. The author didn’t create a world. He created something like 7 vivid worlds that each had their own culture, lore, races, histories, etc. even if everything wasn’t explained the the reader, enough was implied that the worlds all felt real. I believe that the author spent a lot of time thinking about these different places and described them well. Overall, this is a good idea and a good start. You wrote a lot and have created a fantastic world to play with. I would just take some time to make sure you are conveying that world with out typos, misspelling, etc ruining the readers view. This was like looking at a beautiful landscape through a dirty window. Fortunately, it should be relatively easy to fix with proofreading.

minho_Shiny
minho_ShinyLv3minho_Shiny

The synopsis sure was very interesting and got me hooked up. The world background was very well described making it easy for readers like me. The plot was unique and immediately piqued my Interest. The story development was also well in pace. Not too fast nor not too slow. I could feel the author's unique writing style and I liked it.Author did a great job in describing scenarios.All in all author did a great job and looking forward to read more. I will definitely give 5/5 to encourage author and for his hardwork.

Brandongould94
Brandongould94AuthorBrandongould94

Hello this is the Author i just rembered that it might be confusing when you look up my book that there are four books under Tylingariea. The Tylingariea Epic is the main series, Demonsong is the sequel series you don't have to read it i have stopped writing it and transfered the lore into the Tylingariea epic. just wanted to clear that up