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two hundred chapters and less than fifty thousand words? That's kinda... sad. Somethings wrong with the cover system btw, its not updating. It still has your terr1bIe drawing cover from before. Edit: and by the way the book is kinda horr1bIe, just like the cover. I read the prologue, then i couldn't get past another word.
If this is a translated story then no comments on grammer, but if it's not then I must say your grammer construction needs some work. Get a proofreader to read your work before publishing. I'd give you an honest review, i couldn't read the first chapter finish because of the grammer but I'll try reading the next chapter though. But over all it seems interesting keep up the good work. Also the book cover could really turn people off, Change it.
It's a really good premise, I like the characters and concepts (I'm a sucker for half demon characters) I can't wait to see what the father's story is and the full extent of the characters abilities. The chapters do need some editing but if that type of stuff isn't too bothersome for you then I wholeheartedly recommend you read this.
The concept, I must say, is very good. I'm always a sucker for these kind of themes so I really liked the angel, demons and human world. I'm also intrigued with the brothers dynamic. Though, one thing, I hope the errors in the story will be corrected because I personally think it would further improve the overall quality of the story. Well, keep up the good work, author!
An intriguing novel! I enjoyed the detail that was given to the world building aspects of the novel, and the interesting twist put on demons. There are some very unique aspects about this book, and I especially liked the crafting of the character Ruby, she was very fun to read. I would say there are a few issues with tense that sometimes makes this novel a bit hard to read. But other than that, it's a good book!