So I’m a few chapters in and usually I don’t do Fantasy Romance because it’s not my thing but I really like your book, and I would continue reading it. Adira is the combination and definition of a born leader who’s strong and resilient with a lot of sass. I like how well thought out and drawn her character is. Moreso, can we talk about how awesome your descriptive prowess is? It’s amazing and very impressive.❤️😌
Nice plot, I really liked the character Adira. The character developments of others are also good. Though I'm not much into the Fantasy Romance genre this book is quite nice. I liked it. But it needs a but if corrections I've pointed out some of them but still I'll suggest you read before publishing your chapters. All the best :)
Right off the bat, this story is very intriguing! I really like the premise, the world building, and the characters. Lenna is my favorite secondary character mainly because I really like parents who are very supportive and encouraging towards their kid's goals. I also really enjoyed the descriptions of the settings, characters, and even their attire. Overall, great story!
this is a very powerful story. I especially like the strengths of your character . The way you describe things is very refreshing. I'm awed with the world you created and I'm hoping to learn more about it as the novel progresses . there's this confidence in your writing . I'm cheering you on . Good luck !