I really like the FL character yeah shes loud and rambunctious but its not too much and she is quite likeable. The ML is like a walnut tough to crack with his workaholic exterior not to mention his being a germaphobe I'm pretty sure the FL will help him a lot with letting his walls down. She'll help him loosen up and...I feel like he might help her have aspirations. I also love the other characters. You have a great writing style that reels people in, once I started reading I could not stop. Now I will just have to wait for an update.