EternalDragonO0
I know this is just a translated fanfic, but I will review it anyways. This is just a cultivation novel in the form of a dragon ball fanfic. The description got my hopes up, but ultimately I was dissapointed. A random saiyan girl somehow gets just as strong as the MC somehow, and the girl just follows him aroung which feels forced. I strongly dislike hoe at first the MC didnt like her and boom after a couple months he likes her. She is probably going to be the love interest which is stupid, and a lot of things and events are forced. Im just disspointed. I gave 2 stars for the writing because the translation was ok.
Everything is trash. This FanFiction was good at the first 15 chapters but right after that the fanfic took a real turn. Matter of fact this cant even be called a fanfic after that point. This fanfic turned into a Cultivation novel. Everyone in the entire story acts like those people from Xianxia and Xianxua novels. The MC is like a typical chinese novel mc and the main girl act like those cold beauty senior sister.
MC is a Saiyan, but not only he, but the female support character don't hold Saiyan names, instead they are Chinese, and stupid to pronounce in English. I didn't get very far before the fic began to feel repetitive to other fics I've read about Dragon Ball. I.E. Trains on Vegeta for a few years, gets sent to a planet higher than expected, beats planet, goes to earth, trains, goes BACK to the death trap that is planet Vegeta, blah blah blah. You get the idea. So I'm dropping here
Statistically, this book would be good I cannot lie its a nice story very well translated, I like how to book moves forward but if I where to give a real personal review on how it is so far...id say a 3 star rating. The female main character is annoying and seems so forced how she behaves around the MC. If she died the story wouldn't be affected and id quite like to see it happen. The author decides to change it to a cultivation web novel and changes ki to qi, training to cultivation like why? its a fucking dragon ball fan fictions ffs. uses BS wuxia knowledge honestly a real disappointment. I enjoy the story but these things are very annoying
Reasoning makes no sense. Like how is the highest power lvl 1000 and your great ape form is over 9000 and you still can't wipeout the world population. Then there is instant transmission that does not work like the original instant transmission but instead is space worping. So yeah could of been better but with this nonsense I stopped reading it at chapter 12.
the novel is good, but it's already being translated by someone. they've covered 509 chapters so far; they also have a patron up if you want to read more. I also see people complaining about the writing, but tbh, I didnt read this version and the version I did read wasn't that bad, so I'm not sure where they got this from.
after long time i wanted to reread this story because half of what i read was MTL... now after just a few first chapters i remembered the only flaw that i always see in Chinese fanfics... all OC has distinct Chinese names that are contrasting with original naming convention... But i guess here it can slightly hide behind Son Goku and his sons... ButMK2 you have to admit that Xiaya and Xiling is weird name for a Saiyan... --- Kakarot, Vegeta, Bradock...
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