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sami
samiLv6sami

i'll give it 5 stars since it seems quite interesting -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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AdamW
AdamWLv13AdamW

Well reduced update stability to one due to the premium (paywall) "feature". Gonna have to give up on this one for at least a year like the other "premium" novels as I'd rather let my spirit stones expire than pay over the odds spirit stone charges. Some of the other "premium" novels pad the word count with translator and editor comments to get more money.

AsianInvasion111
AsianInvasion111Lv5AsianInvasion111

Its basically another wdqk with the author having shot for brains coming up with random bs/plot armor saying oh his luck came up with this or the villain got out of dying cuz he somehow had this extraordinary ability. There is no sufficient reason or fore planning for any of his plot. It's just bam slam whamma jam bs.

SpiritWolf
SpiritWolfLv5SpiritWolf

Sh*t's not fun anymore. Gonna drop it for a year or something like that, so i can read some more. Damn SS paywall just dropped. GG. Can't rate the novel as decent because of that. Story is kinda mediocre, MC is always "shocking the audience", and all that "luck aura" stuff became boring after it saved the life of MC for around the 100th time. Sigh.

Azhilaf
AzhilafLv11Azhilaf

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NappatheSaiyan
NappatheSaiyanLv10NappatheSaiyan

Just from reading the beginning I can tell you that this novel is about as cookie cutter Xuanyuan as it gets. Unoriginal story, character, and developments. This is a carbon copy story where the same events will happen from every other novel of it's genre. Do yourself a favor and find an actual book to read.

Omarino
OmarinoLv5Omarino

The author is a cunt that milks his own story and pulls bull**** out of his ass every single chapter this cunt shouldn't even write kids storys let alone anything else fuking chinks and their 1 dimensional writing

Tashady
TashadyLv15Tashady

This was a surprise to me. I didn't think I'd like this novel, but I'm dying to read more chapters. The concept is rather fresh and the MC makes sense with his train of thought. Will probably be one of my must-reads!

Rsblessy
RsblessyLv5Rsblessy

Story is okay. Superb Plot Armor. SHITTY SPIRITSTONE REQUIREMENTS. whats with the lots of SS req?? u want readers to stop reading??!! I get it that you need to earn. but atleast dont be greedy. cant write review of its below 3 stars?

Frostmourne
FrostmourneLv5Frostmourne

Great story so far in my opinion, but the spirit stone needed to read this are getting on my nerves. I will wait until it's 4 spirit stone, or 1 ad.

WisH
WisHLv6WisH

From Chapter 1 to Chapter 68~ The novel start off having the MC which is super unlucky and from the real world dying but at the last moment, he transmigrated into a world filled with superpowers which is gene ability and technology like virtual reality. Now in the new world, he would smack all the faces of bad people and become super op like how any MC out there currently. The story's direction is similar to novels like warlock of the magus world, wizard world and many more xianxia out there but the abilities and the power systems is what sets apart the novel with others. But of course, the MC must have a single super unique op ability just like the computer chip in WOTMW. Don't worry readers, what I have said here is not a spoiler really but something you expect when going into such novels and the synopsis have given it away so you can read this. I would give the novel story development 3.5 because the pace is not as slow and the MC is going somewhere and becoming better. Some of the flaws which causes it not reaching 4.0 or higher is because the story don't really have a purpose yet nor goal that is worthy for the MC to aim to have the strongest gene. Why can't he live his life quietly after being transmigrated but he must be strong for some reason? The villain is not as scary as he should be. In certain situations, the MC really did some unrealistic decisions such as showing his cards when he is still weak and while he did try to justify his decisions, the justification is not very compelling. Character design is for now only about the MC with some side characters that I care little to none. This is not a bad point as focusing on MC only is something I do enjoy reading but the side characters still need some more description such as how they look, personality and not just their age and family status. The MC is like the main foundation of the story while the side characters is like the bricks to the house. It feels like the SC is pebbles in the story and they are just non existent. The MC is the type that is meticulous and somewhat smart but with the power of OP ability, his plot armor thickens and that characteristics/personality is not fully explored. MC's history is somewhat explored but not fully.The villain is still quite weak so they are only face smacking targets. 3.3 star World Buildings is also average 3.0 as it is him staying in one place and not much about the world is describe, except that there is many uninhabited place that he can explore next time. MC went to a few locations already but the locations is not descriptive so hard to imagine it. At least the power systems is mentioned. Update Stability being average 3.0 as well since 10 Chapter is the norm for a novel translation Translation Quality is 4.8 stars for me because the translator is really doing a great job as I understand it how it should be and that I did not really get lost from the novel. An improvement can be distinguishing virtual and real world maybe? Add a bold line between the two world or some indication because sometime I wonder if the places he is are virtual or real sometimes. Overall, the novel is going to be interesting and enjoyable but I suggest reading it when 200+Chapters is out so that you can binge it.Good work Translator. 6666666 Overall score: 3.52 ( average)

ProlyLytherin
ProlyLytherinLv4ProlyLytherin

Good, I like it. I'm on chapter 314 right now! Not much else to say. Some parts are kinda bad but overall I think it might be worth reading. The tournament is probably the lowest point in the novel which was purely face slapping... but after that grind, It did become okay. The author is good at making funny moments but the story does have some problems. Translations are also good!

EternalRest
EternalRestLv14EternalRest

DO NOT READ!!!! This book is not worth wasting you time on reading do to the 150 chapter PAYWALL!!! 150 at OVER 10 ss a pop. GREEDY Chinese site that is ridiculous!!!!

SunGodLin
SunGodLinLv4SunGodLin

Overall, this novel is pure genius. The world building is fun and full of unexpected surprises. MC is never the OP type but more of a shameless guy who trick his enemy to his traps. The story is really funny and you never really expect what will happen unlike those trash novels whos only reason for existing is about revenge. Another genius thing about this novel is that MC is not constrained into one path (revenge, kill the main villain) as there has none and it is more of adventuring. Characters - Unlike many novels, this novel introduce characters but never abandons them. Those introduced in the earlier part of the novels shows up later to do adventures with MC. Characters have personality, are not half-assed made, and are not superficial. This is one of my favorite about this novel.

mahdi12
mahdi12Lv5mahdi12

The starts in a great way. The author seems to get confused midway introducing stuff that might not seem logical to the world but this can be forgiven. Sometimes the characters seem all over the place. But its ok. The story was still worth the read. But they started locking chapters. They have more than 50 chapters locked. This is just way to annoying. There is no point in locking this many chapters. Use advertisements as alternatives. Don't just force everyone to buy the stones. People might be happy to use the stones for 4-5 chapters but paying for more than 50 chapters just seem ridiculous.

RedSnow15
RedSnow15Lv4RedSnow15

The story is great by what killed it for me it's that we currently have 45 chapter locked. Like i can understand 12 chapter like other novel here but this one actually has 45 locked it's ridiculious.

I_Am_Immortal
I_Am_ImmortalLv4I_Am_Immortal

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UdiPotaNyo
UdiPotaNyoLv4UdiPotaNyo

Pak u qidan. You what happened to the 18 chapter per week releases. Now you only release 1 chapter per day. Once story picks up or getting good you suddenly drop the paking number of chapters. Pak u

CloakedWillow
CloakedWillowLv15CloakedWillow

I really enjoyed the book at first but towards the end it gets so confusing it just becomes a drag to actually finish it been on hold for a few months haven't had the energy to try and finish it

Daoist428
Daoist428Lv1Daoist428

The novel should be titled ¨Afortunado¨ because genes and everything else is in the background insignificant, at first the story seems very interesting and the original MC's trap, but as the MC progresses it looks more and more useless and exasperates the reader , it's all luck zero ability, in short, it was an idea with a lot of potential executed in an extremely mediocre way that takes away the desire to advance in the story