Naxur
I haven't seen much neglect fics so this was somewhat knew to me. The mc is the son of Sirzechs and Grayfia but was abandoned on the human world. Anyway the writing quality is good and readable and the mc is powerful af. The mc has UBW along with the boosted gear and several other longinuses along with the power of destruction As I like godlike mc's will give 5 stars.
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truthfullynI only read the first chap and the reason I make this is because I was confused in what the author write. the simplest way to understand his writing is that he write the story in china and translate it using google translate, as there was thing that he say look like spear? or sword maybe? I don't really know but it was gigantic and he called it a gun. also the word for himself sometime get turned into you, which confuse me even more. as for the story it was fate x dxd probably as there was alaya, gaia, and noble phantasm that the author call as noble ghost.
Well, the prologue is simply bad and illogical. I am already considering to drop the story and I just finished the prologue. The author gave the Mc God Mode from the start and other characters act like idiots and without reason, he goes to Kuoh because of the original plot. It reads like the chuuni dream of a 14-year old hobby writer, who wrote without plan along with only just a rough idea towards a plotline. The sad thing is if the author had made an actual plan and reduced the chuuni-factor I believe this could have panned out as a relatively good story.
With this story you have the author that doesn't make any of the grammar corrections that the readers notices but will any delete comment that has any sort of criticism within this book, the author will delete it instead of fixing the errors. In short every character to include the MC will either swap gender with each paragraph or have some wording issues that makes no sense within that paragraph.