1 Read this before the first chapter!

Hello, twoscal here. I've decided to start writing again as I am now in a more stable part of my life and have more time to continue a series without dropping it. I have experimented with re-writing previous chapters and would like to know what you all think! To that end, I will be posting two versions of each chapter, the original: the original, and the re-written one. if you could let me know in the comments which chapter you prefer and why that would mean a lot to me.