Reviews of The Soldier Husband
The Soldier Husband
klmorgan
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4 stars simply because you deserve it....In the sense that you written close to a 100 chps. ..congrats.... but I don't like your story..... (If your story was based on something that happened to you and you alone ignore what is next....otherwise do read on) Look I just read the summary and I decided that I don't like your story because....see the man and girl were apparently lovers in their teens but the man decided to go to war and the women got married because of family told her too and had child...but the thing is that it seems that both man and woman promised to get married in their teens.....where is the love and is it worth it...If they loved each other ..The man would've waited for the girl...and so would have the girl..hell she should have loved him enough to abandon her family for him...but noooo..... Why would you write this? (Mind you I am not bashing you nor am I trying to insult you...I am honestly asking why would you write this. If this is a story..you could have used your limitless imagination to write a happy story..ie: the woman and man ran away together...or the girl simply waited for him faithfully and so did he)...basically something happy ...like a soldier retuning to his family and living happily whilst trying to get over the war horrors and also rasing his children.... I mean reality , (not always) is already filled hoes/sluts/rapists/wife beaters,etc..so why not write something happy... plus so many novels here always have this kind of separation ****....so why not write something happy? Once again I am neither insulting nor demeaning your work....you are probably a good writer...I am just asking
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I don't know what the funky is going on here . is this a story about Mathew and Lexi or Philip and Chester?? cos I'm 20 chapters in and so far 90% is Chester and Philip . I signed up for a military story (literally what I typed in the search bar ) . as cute as this is I've been misled and therefore disappointed in the bio. Great story though .
I love that this consists of Lexi and Matthew's story starting and continuing from Offer to the CEO 🖤 your character development is amazing, and it you always amazed me with every new detail given about who a character was. My only qualms are that I wish you has a Beta to help with any spelling or grammatical errors in your work, as it can be a bit confusing at times and there is no sense of what time of year/how time is moving in the story. It's rarely mentioned what time of year it is, the first I truly remember was Christmas time. Please keep writing because I would love a story about James and Alecia's time in Australia!!!
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I loved this author's first novel and this 2nd novel does not disappoint. The story is solid and the characters are beautifully fleshed out. There are minor grammatical errors. The author just needs a dependable editor to iron out those small issues. Sadly, I was originally her editor, but I flaked out on her. I apologize again dear author. This author updates regularly and is serious about making a good novel. I think we'll see her works published on major platforms some day.
