The plot setting and character development are good. A story about a woman taking the initiative to be something on her own is interesting. But do prioritize the editing over the releases to enhance the content quality. Minor grammatical errors do seem like nothing much but can be annoying in stories especially relating to 'character development'. One would love to bookmark it after a couple of tune-ups. Overall, the pacing and writing are good. Keep it up.👏👏
Good story! Who doesn't like a strong, independent and brave female lead? Readers, if you're bored of reading books in which the female is weak and falls for the guy in a blink of eye, this book is definitely for you! You won't get bored. Your writing style is good. But I'd suggest you to edit the book once. There are a few grammatical errors as well as typos. Moreover, you haven't indicated which dialogue belongs to whom so that's confusing. 5/5 from me on story development and character design. The story is progressing nicely. Neither too far nor too slow. You've given a vivid description of Fl's working life so that was a plus for me. Overall good job! Keep writing!
The story is really good! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏The plotting is great and I love the fact that most of the setting is at the company or outside in court and negotiating for settlement with the defendant lawer. I like the whole come back thing with a strong behaviour where now Leonora has become a better version and fulfilling her dreams and leaving her past behind. Author, please update more chapters Now, I can't wait to see if the kid is Leonora's child. 🤔
First of all, I want to say that until now, I like what I'm reading. It's a good book, and it's already added to my library. Secondly, I want to tell you not to give up on this book because it has good content and promises to be a success. Third, there are some grammatical errors, but nothing that you can't fix with time. Keep writing and publish more because I already finished the current chapters. Because it is a good book, I will recommend it.
Reliving the tale of a lawyer and her life. Overall, the flow of the storyline seems pretty good. And other than some confusing parts, I think this novel gives a pretty realistic view. I just think the author needs to write more chapters, so that readers can more fully immerse themselves. But keep up the good work author !
it has too few chapters for now and mostly we see the main character and can understand who she is and what she represents. if it's a romance story spicing things up can help liven the situation up to keep readers reading, people love romance and they love good romance even more. the author can do many things since the groundwork seems to be taking shape. I see some grammatical errors in each chapter, but that can be corrected. also, if the narrative goes in the third person it should be in the third person and if it jumps towards the first person it must be done carefully. a smooth transition is important good luck !!