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Reviews of The Shadow of The Past

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Hell_in_Heaven
Hell_in_HeavenLv1Hell_in_Heaven

The plot setting and character development are good. A story about a woman taking the initiative to be something on her own is interesting. But do prioritize the editing over the releases to enhance the content quality. Minor grammatical errors do seem like nothing much but can be annoying in stories especially relating to 'character development'. One would love to bookmark it after a couple of tune-ups. Overall, the pacing and writing are good. Keep it up.πŸ‘πŸ‘

NuiXiel
NuiXielLv2NuiXiel

I am looking forward to what will happen next specially because its romance and i am sure to add this on my library keep up the good wok my co-writer

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

Good story! Who doesn't like a strong, independent and brave female lead? Readers, if you're bored of reading books in which the female is weak and falls for the guy in a blink of eye, this book is definitely for you! You won't get bored. Your writing style is good. But I'd suggest you to edit the book once. There are a few grammatical errors as well as typos. Moreover, you haven't indicated which dialogue belongs to whom so that's confusing. 5/5 from me on story development and character design. The story is progressing nicely. Neither too far nor too slow. You've given a vivid description of Fl's working life so that was a plus for me. Overall good job! Keep writing!

Sabin_Subedi_Fei
Sabin_Subedi_FeiLv1Sabin_Subedi_Fei

This novel is good, but it is hard to give a review just by four chapters. An author should improve himself in romance to write better romance on his novel

FLOR_Diaz
FLOR_DiazLv1FLOR_Diaz

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Lethabo_Moloto
Lethabo_MolotoLv1Lethabo_Moloto

Still on chapter 3, but so far I'm loving it. The characters are entertaining! Cute!!!! I agree with Patricio. Leonora is cute. I'm going to live Lucio. A lot. I recommend this book πŸ‘

Sphokazi_Msindoo
Sphokazi_MsindooLv1Sphokazi_Msindoo

Keep it up!!! This good, a few mistakes but nothing that can't be fixed. Go, girl!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Amosi_Dyasi
Amosi_DyasiLv1Amosi_Dyasi

I love the synopsis and the whole plot... I'm here praying for Leon and Tricio be together....I added to my library and waiting for the next chapters. Keep it up😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Fika_Mahleza
Fika_MahlezaLv1Fika_Mahleza

So far I’m loving the book. Well put plot and I love the fact that she’s a strong female lead. Keep up with the good work!!! I can’t wait to see how Leonora and Patricio relationship will be like. I added the book on m library to keep reading! 😍😍😍😍πŸ”₯

Amintha12
Amintha12Lv6Amintha12

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Midnyt_Zun
Midnyt_ZunLv3Midnyt_Zun

I give this book one hundred stars! There is a nice plot and interesting scene. I can't wait to find out what happen next!!! Keep it up!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

bjalex
bjalexLv1bjalex

Reading the first chapter made me so intrigued!The first chaoter doesn’ have ANY grammar mistakes which comes as a suprise to me as authors usually have a bunch of grammar mistakes! Good luck on writing!

YaraLucas
YaraLucasLv2YaraLucas

The story is really good! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘The plotting is great and I love the fact that most of the setting is at the company or outside in court and negotiating for settlement with the defendant lawer. I like the whole come back thing with a strong behaviour where now Leonora has become a better version and fulfilling her dreams and leaving her past behind. Author, please update more chapters Now, I can't wait to see if the kid is Leonora's child. πŸ€”

KUKORO
KUKOROLv5KUKORO

this is a great story, if you like romance and tired of generic love story where the MC met a handome CEO then have a ONS, and after years they meet again, then i would recommend this book

Amalie_Satre
Amalie_SatreLv1Amalie_Satre

First of all, I want to say that until now, I like what I'm reading. It's a good book, and it's already added to my library. Secondly, I want to tell you not to give up on this book because it has good content and promises to be a success. Third, there are some grammatical errors, but nothing that you can't fix with time. Keep writing and publish more because I already finished the current chapters. Because it is a good book, I will recommend it.

Readoholic
ReadoholicLv4Readoholic

ice meets the fire .... interesting.... I loved the character of Leonara and this story plot. Looking forward for more updates. This was really a wonderful read. Keep up the good work. :)

SolAce
SolAceLv3SolAce

Reliving the tale of a lawyer and her life. Overall, the flow of the storyline seems pretty good. And other than some confusing parts, I think this novel gives a pretty realistic view. I just think the author needs to write more chapters, so that readers can more fully immerse themselves. But keep up the good work author !

radashta
radashtaLv2radashta

it has too few chapters for now and mostly we see the main character and can understand who she is and what she represents. if it's a romance story spicing things up can help liven the situation up to keep readers reading, people love romance and they love good romance even more. the author can do many things since the groundwork seems to be taking shape. I see some grammatical errors in each chapter, but that can be corrected. also, if the narrative goes in the third person it should be in the third person and if it jumps towards the first person it must be done carefully. a smooth transition is important good luck !!

keyFineias
keyFineiasLv1keyFineias

This is honestly a great book. It's so detailed, Interesting and mystrious. You really put a lot of work and your time into this story. Good job, Godmother. Keep it going, never give it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Enouk
EnoukLv1Enouk

This is a good book and the writing style is unique. It's simple and really easy to understand. The story is catchy and just by the first chapter wants me to keep reading it. I'm hooked. The ongoing plot is interresting and mysterious. I will support it until the end!!! keep it up!