JustLikeWriting777
Normally, suspense novels are not my cup of tea. they are rarely well written as web novels, and there are plenty on market as real books. thus, it's easy to not read one. However, this one.. it pulls you in right from the beginning. the language easy, the feelings quite simple to understand, yet complex in the way they get maintained.. it's brilliantly written. I think I found a keeper for my library..
Every single thing about this book is amazing. This was written very well, the suspense, the mystery, the horror...Everything! The questions from the first few chapters pull in the reader, makes them feel the emotion laid out in every single scene and every chapter. Good work author! I don't regret adding this to my library and taking my time to read through it, I will definitely give a more detailed review once I'm done.
The plot is interesting from the start ! With the boy’s dreams being affected by something is the main mystery in this case for me. I like how the progression is going, and I don’t have any problems with story development or world background. I see few/ to no errors in the passage, which is a great sign. I’m anticipating more chapters, so keep up the good work author !
I've read your "They Fall Apart" book before this. Sad to hear that you're stopping it. Still, this book is a cut above it. I could tell because there was a clear distinction between the dialogues and the scenes are well thought out. Slap in more eerie prose in the story and this is good to go. I didn't see any issues grammar wise... or I might've just overlooked them since I was too engrossed in reading ehehe. Keep up the great work! This is added to my library ehehe. This reminds me of the Darkwoods game because of the first scene ^o^
Most of the books with first perspective will get so confusing sometimes but here the way the shift of perpectives is clean and with the mentions in the chapter it is very easy to read. Now, coming to the story it is one of a kind. Interesting scenarios and humane interactions between the charecters are very natural. Great Work!!!!!1
Really cool story, that is both good for people that love mystery and/or thriller type of stories, hooks you from the start and the Author knows how to keep you engaged all in all the only bad thing would that it only has 7 chapters (as of writing) but i will be coming back for more! So keep it up Author!