Oh, My God! What an interesting start! I don't usually read first pov stories but god this got me hooked like?? From the start, it has an eerie feeling but not enough to scare you away. I like the suspense and the pace of this story. The world back is amazing. The author's writing style is just a chef's kiss. I'm honestly excited about how this story will flow in the future. Thank you so much for working so hard!
Amazing Story. It has 2 parallel storylines at the start. Though personally, Joey's story is way more engaging than the other half... It's not like the other one isn't good, it just pales in comparison. The author is an expert in building up a feeling of horror. I am totally sucked in by this story. It's amazing so do check it out and add it to your collections. Best of luck author.
I was wondering why the author and the character names were all so familiar when I realized that I reviewed your short story last time XD. Anyway, I'm glad that you decided to expand on it so we can see more about the characters and the story that you want to tell. Writing quality is great; I didn't notice many errors at all. The plot is moving along nicely, and I like how relatable the protagonist's thoughts are. Keep writing author! You're doing great!
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This is an amazing story. The way you narrate things and the way you present the MC's thoughts is really top notch. I got hooked into this story from the first chapter and I am really enjoying it. Just a few editing here and there but other than that well done, author. I just added this good piece to my collection and looking forward to other updates!
Oh god you really get goosebumps while reading it. A suspens mistery take you high from first chapter only 👏👏👏 After second chapter you want to know everything and tend to read more and more...Feels really bad for the boy who is suffering because he wants to live this life.👍👍👍 You got me hooked author...Great story... The great story telling...Yes you are the best 👏👏👏